Black Poetry : false awakening (cabin fever memoirs )

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  1. alyce

    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    in our cabin
    nestled in the thick
    flora of the mountains

    I wake up under down
    comforters, your right arm slung just
    above my head
    I, on my stomach, completely underneath
    the covers
    you, on your back, your
    torso above

    I peer out and up at you
    your head turned away from me
    on the pillow
    your eyes closed
    snoring softly
    I move my face inside your arm pit
    to blow gently
    my movement makes you stir a little,
    sigh, and you moan low and turn
    your head toward me
    never opening your eyes
    I stay inside your arm pit
    and ease my right arm across
    your middle
    it seems like an automatic reflex
    when you move your
    right leg across my ***
    and let your thigh rest there
    your leg dangles off the edge of
    the bed,

    with my right leg
    I tunnel and scoot my body
    in the space beneath you and
    stretch my right leg over
    your left thigh
    slightly raising
    your booty as I do
    this
    you moan again
    and with your left
    hand, you reach over
    and gently take my
    hand from your stomach,
    guiding it
    down to the little tent
    Mr. MasterPeace
    had made
    in the sheets

    I squeal and giggle
    and hear the rich sound
    of your voice
    vibrate through your body
    say, “ uh huhhh”
    I peak up and see you
    grinning at me
    &

    in an indescribable motion
    you position me
    beside you,
    spread me wide
    with you between my thighs

    you enter slowly
    & deep

    we begin to move
    and it IZ the perfect
    dance

    we make such good
    love beneath the covers

    and we rehearse,
    re-work, re-wind,
    repeat
    several times
    in the tub
    on the balcony
    on the floor
    on the rug
    in front of
    the fireplace

    our entire
    week-end
    in naked
    bliss

    we spend

    feeding each other
    sleeping whenever
    loving every moment
    singing off key
    reading out loud
    laughing even louder

    writing new verses

    we are happily 'spent'

    HIGH in the mountains

    in our cabin
    watching the sunrise
    and set

    in each other’s
    eyes

    renewed
    revived...
    ~~~~~~~~~~~

    the buzzing sound of
    the 5 a.m. alarm
    jolts me upright

    it's Thursday morning
    & you aren't here

    I feel like dying


    alyce, 2001
     
  2. wildflower7

    wildflower7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    somehow you always manage to suspend me in time, in every line, drawn, taken in completely to your flow. i never seem to want my read to end. thank you. this was so deep. a full novel in short verse.
    i feel like dying!
    -7
     
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    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    My sista Alyce~

    How precious these memoirs must be...!
    I felt alla dis and then some...now it got
    me lookin' for my 'honey' ~
    Ya' know you keepz it rrrrrrreeeeeeaaaaaaalllll!

    This was Xtreme girlfrynd, and I loved it!
     
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    mojo Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ms. a

    is this part of a series? been reading you a while and I've seen a few pieces on mountains, nature trails, secluded cabins....flora, fauna, f.... :D

    feelin your vibes always

    mojo
     
  5. MapleXtract

    MapleXtract Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    My goodness!!!

    If this isn't the epitome of, extremely, vivid imagery, I don't know what is. Exceptional, Ms. Alyce (but, then again, when is it not?)...:D
     
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