Black Poetry : Fallout

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  1. Mikha'el

    Mikha'el Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    So me n life broke-up i cried i tried to play kiss n make up

    Tried to make it work despite the obvious notion

    It was over emoitions floating in a ocean

    Of sorrows unsure of tomorrow

    I don't know where to go or what to do

    What to think Thought process on pause it's over faster than my eyes blinked

    SUPRISE! unfortunately for me i could accept the fact n realize

    For days i was in a zone all alone in a jealous rage

    Couldn't let it go couldn't turn the page

    All my efforts in vain my face stained in humilation

    How i got tricked by such a dirty **** played the game for a couple bucks

    God how i hate her so but thats just the way she goes

    But my heart held on for it held so long

    Untill my emotions went still start feeling ill it really set in

    This is where the story begins my life hooked on the gin

    Unable to cope unconsciously i gave up on me

    Can't face reality so i defy the rules of consciousness

    And created 2 alter egos to cope with my existance

    With nobody in my corner so i thought

    I needed someone in my corner to help heal my damaged heart

    Introducing offically the 2 dark halves of me

    Heartbreak n Solo Dolo
     
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    Hello and Welcome Mike...

    I like how those lines flow together. Being a broken heart survivor I can relate to all the emotions in this piece. Thanks for sharing your work with us.


    feelin'itsouldeep!
    Coco
     
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    Thanks =]

    Look out for the rest of them...this only the 2nd poem in the series
     
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    great piece as the series continue flow on Mike
     
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    Mikha'el Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks....i'll post the next poem in the series in a few days
     
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