Black Poetry : Falling

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  1. Kitana

    Kitana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Every day I need you more
    and it's getting to be
    that I'm not sure
    what falling in love
    is all about

    BUT

    if it means
    that you haunt my dreams
    every night
    and that I
    think you
    hung the moon
    in my sky
    then I guess that I
    am falling

    if it means
    that you regulate
    the oxygen
    that I breathe
    and that you
    control the beats
    per minute
    of my heart
    then I guess that I
    am falling

    if it means
    you're the sunshine
    that warms my skin
    and the uncontrollable
    excitement
    I feel within
    when you enter
    my body
    then I guess that I
    am falling

    if it means
    you're every tear I cry
    and every word that
    I speak from my lips
    if it's because I
    die each time you
    kiss me
    and come alive each time
    you touch me
    then I guess that I
    am falling

    if it means
    that I think you're
    absolutely~
    undeniably~
    positively~
    unbelievably~
    the most wonderful thing
    that has ever happened to me
    then I guess that I
    don't need to wonder
    anymore because
    I have already
    F
    A
    L
    L
    E
    N
    in love with you

    (c) nfn 2002
     
  2. baller

    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i would say that you summed it up, quite nicely, in the end.


    "I have already
    F
    A
    L
    L
    E
    N
    in love with you "

    i hope everyone can experience love like this...at least once in their life...THAT THEY MIGHT BETTER APPRECIATE AN ORDINARY, STABILIZING LOVE like mine. coz, babygurl...

    i don't want you to die
    when i kiss you
    and be reborn
    when i touch you

    i want you to sense everything
    i do to you
    ...every moment i'm with you

    i want you to know
    pleasures
    beyond your dreams
    but
    regulated oxygen
    just seems so
    unrealistic
    to me

    i want you to be
    the meaning of
    LOVE
    not just experience
    what love is
    LIKE

    i don't want you to cry
    and never say
    goodbye
    just
    promise you're be there
    without telling a
    LIE

    i want you to...
    know love
    as i know
    YOU.
     
  3. mkhaya lo'

    mkhaya lo' Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    my my my!!!!!!!! clearly three is company here-all I can say is, enjoy your love-all the way through!..remember-you'll never get anything out of a relationship that you don't put into it-happy lovin'

    lo'
     
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    I feel like a vouyer too. LOL But am very happy for you two. CUZ I know exactly the feeling.
     
  5. cocobutterskyn

    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Beautiful! Beautiful!

    Kitana gurl.... you were born to write.

    It is always a pleasure to read you.
    Thanks for sharing your gift :)


    Coco :heart:
     
  6. epiphany

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    Kitana,
    This is just simply beautiful...

    Epiphany :heart:
     
  7. elayne.

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    kt.


    yessssss, honey!! i knew you were gone before
    i'd even made it to the 2 verse!! :lol: this was
    very beautiful-ly done & it felt just like real life.
    i am diggin' this peace... wit 2 Big shovels!! :)

    itsallLove, chile.

    elayne.
     
  8. Kitana

    Kitana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I would say that your reply was beautiful to me

    there is no ordinary love...

    I die
    momentarily
    whenever your fingertips
    caress me
    or your sweet lips kiss me
    because YOU simply stop
    my heart from beating
    and take my breath away

    I live because you love me
    you are my every hope
    every wish every dream
    and every day it seems
    I fall further in love
    with you

    you are my heart
    and I promise
    to love you so completely
    that I
    forget where you end
    and I begin

    until the day I die
    I swear to you
    that I
    will only shed tears of joy
    and a lie will never
    leave my lips

    I want you to
    know that I
    already know the true
    meaning of love
    because I am loved by
    YOU

    and everything in between
    in unimportant
    to you and me
    you are all I'll ever be

    K
     
  9. Kitana

    Kitana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    lo'....thank you for your comment and I agree 100%...lasting love is a work in progress...

    Gaylee...thank you for reading my peace...you bought a smile to my face...this is pure love of a poetic kind....Baller just happens to weave beautiful magic when the subject is love in any form.....

    Coco...for you to say there is beauty in my words is all I need to hear...

    Epip...thank you so much for feeling the deeper side of this....

    Elayne....well now....if the "Love Poetess" gives me the thumbs up I must be doin' something right..I appreciate every word you say, from my heart...

    Shery....the admiration is definitely mutual....

    K
     
  10. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    nice love poem
    feeling the love
    great piece


    DSS
     
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