Black Poetry : Falling

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  1. thatgirl74

    thatgirl74 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Is there anything that can keep me from falling?
    Falling into this abyss.
    My emotions swirl around me like a tornado,
    there is no where that can shelter me
    from the impending destruction.
    The lost will be devestating.
    The loss of control over emotions and
    reasoning for actions.
    Why couldn't anyone predict this?
    How will I handle this?
    There is no reasonable answer for it.
    Except that I am falling for you.
     
  2. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i really liked this...
     
  3. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Falling, and can't stop reason your way out of it. Liked your style here.
     
  4. Antar

    Antar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    groovy...i was about ta sound the alarms
    n run for shelter
    n help ya :D
    sound like you ready for da "katastrophee"
    love yo scrip

    one
    /antar
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    beautifully written from da inner feelings & heart
    love this drop
     
  6. thatgirl74

    thatgirl74 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    THANKS FOR THE FEEDBACK.
     
  7. twision

    twision Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Falling for someone(providing it's the right one) is a very good thing!!!
    I liked this poem
    Like the way it was posed

    "Falling" :love: Haaaaaaa


    Peace and love
     
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