Quiet Poetry Lounge : Falling

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Randee, Aug 1, 2003.

  1. Randee

    Randee Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Under the gentle caress
    of his fingertips
    my rapid breathing subsides.
    I allow myself to fall
    into his arms.
    My naked flesh clothing
    his smooth, dark body.
    Hands and legs intertwined,
    it's only a matter if time
    before I allow him to fall
    purposefully into me,
    We rock together slowly,
    listening to the sounds
    our bodies make in the quiet
    of the morning.
    I hold onto him,
    attempting to hold fast
    to my promise
    of not falling for him.
    As morning falls
    we lay silent,
    afraid to speak in the moments
    after our bodies spoke
    what our mouths can't say.
    Trembling together,
    it's apparent I am not alone.
     
  2. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hey welcome Randee :wave:
    feeling this flow
    looking forward to more
    Peace
     
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    Sweet baby_face Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    That's reall hot, Randee
    Really vibing to this
     
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    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Randee, This is beautiful, simply beautiful. Welcome!
     
  5. Randee

    Randee Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks all, if only these words actually captured the moment.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    welcome Randee dis was on hit u scribe a flow sweet
    let ya ink continue
     
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