Black Poetry : Falling Tears

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  1. Dior Robynsonne

    Dior Robynsonne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yesterday
    echoed in my mind
    and reverberated across
    my silence.
    I allowed
    expensive,
    silver tears to fall
    quickly and smoothly down
    my face and
    into my
    lap.
    There was something
    that sat heavily upon
    my heart
    and for a fraction of a moment
    I almost perceived what it was.
    I faltered and
    the tears continued to fall.
    I immersed myself in liquid
    grief and sorrow.
    The news told of
    a young boy's life lost;
    his young body found in an oven.
    What is this world coming to?
    Somewhere a young woman was
    forcefully raped, and I silently cry harder.
    Just that knowledge brings an image
    of my sister at 14, enduring the same degradement.
    The tears fall
    faster and fall in shades of
    cool blues and wintery greys.
    The heart is heavy
    with lost love and lost hope
    and a midnight seems to descend.
    I'm at the bottom crying for some release.
    But will it come?
    Will it ever come?
    Only time will tell, but the tears continue to fall.

    Copyright 2004 Anno Domini/ "Earth's Wynne" Publishing
    ~Dior X. Robynsonne
     
  2. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice flowin
    deep drop
    Peace
    Angel
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    well felt scribe misty blue tears from da heart of pain
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Some things that happen cause even a heart of stone to cry, this was an emotive flow, keep that pen ging.
     
  5. Dior Robynsonne

    Dior Robynsonne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Much love and respect to all of you. Thank you for your continued help and support.
     
  6. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    your so welcome
    enjoyes ya work
     
  7. Dior Robynsonne

    Dior Robynsonne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I feel the love. Thank you beautiful
     
  8. Joyce

    Joyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Please feel my love also. Your shared your emotions from the ink of your heart. A piece well expressed and written.

    Blessings

    Joyce
     
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    yes ...you have shared with us so deeply ...the feeling you have within...what a wonderful opening of one self...this flow is a work of art indeed
    much love:grouphug: keep the flows coming
    Peace
    BlueWater:heart:
     
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    SWEET FLOW NICE PIECE. I LIKE THE VIBE
     
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