Khasm13 : falling shadows....

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  1. Khasm13

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    as i sit in this corner
    the sun sets
    letting me know i'm a goner
    cause each day the sun dies
    and i'm the only morner
    each and every day
    more of my time on this earth slips away
    and the older i get
    the more i feel like i cannot keep death at bay
    it seems like i can turn from 34 to 43 in the course of one day
    and then from 43 to 63 as april turns to may
    can i accomplish all i need to
    can i finish my task before skys turn from blue
    to a darkish hue
    have i taken the path that God intented me to pursue....
    in lue of all these questions
    the boundries of space and time is what i'm testing
    because eventhough society wants me too
    i can't settle for less than
    what i am due
    these shadows on my back aren't new
    and neither is the hate that i've been privy to
    cause my people have been persecuted more than any jew
    but these falling shadows tell me
    that in this hate i must stew
    until my meager days are through...
     
  2. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I am quite impressed with this emotive piece, Bro. Khasm.

    You've expressed so well what we each feel from time to time.

    Your immortality lies in leaving behind profound writing such as this. WELL DONE
     
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    so often i feel this and know this so well
    can't keep it at bay like under a spell
    u expressed this so well bruh !
     
  4. nevar

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    i like the flow of this my brotha keep up the good writes.:spinstar:
     
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    Nice drop Khasm
    Keep those shadows behind you. For they shall never be allowed to over come a great thinker.
     
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    cursed heart Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    WOW THIS WAS SO DEEP AND AMAZING!
    WONDERFULLY WRITTEN KHASM!:love: :love: :love: :love: :love: :love:
     
  7. Queen Of Poetry

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    this is probably the best poem i have read in my short time here i really like
    you expressd it perfectly

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  8. skrybble7

    skrybble7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I can relate. Tyte drop poet.
    One love
     
  9. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    man

    i definitely feel you on this

    all the stuff that surrounds

    man keep it simple
    cut the fat
    and have fun

    peace poet
     
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    You are a great poet
    I just truely think this is the perfect poem
    Much Love on this frop dam you the man
     
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