Black Poetry : Falling In Love

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  1. Bishop

    Bishop Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    What happens when you fall in love

    With a voice and a flow

    Far away from where you are

    Fall in love

    With a queen

    That your heart has longed for

    But destiny

    Has taken you down different paths

    Never allowing you to meet

    Yet you fall in love

    Deeply in love

    The kind of love

    Where no matter who is in front of you

    She is who you see

    The kind of love

    Where your every dream

    You pray will never end

    Falling in love

    Somehow wishing

    That 2 different worlds

    Would come 2gether

    Yet you know it most likely won’t happen

    Falling in love

    Hurting

    Because your heart wont be quickened

    By the touch of who you truly desire

    Hmmm

    Even though that desire may be taboo

    Does it diminish

    The love

    The desire

    Or the prayer

    That burns within your members

    Falling in love

    With a spirit

    That connects with your very own

    Completing you

    Falling in love

    Falling

    Ever falling

    Ever falling

    Until falling becomes fell
     
  2. Bluewater

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    Hi Bishop
    May I vibe a bit?

    What does one do?
    When they fall in love with a dream
    And that dream turns out to be real
    Yet the connection fades because of distance
    And the heart longs to be fully connected
    Yet the path they walk leads in opposite direction
    But still you fall in love.
    For love is unexpected
    It's so unpredictable
    And love has away of
    Just
    Happening.
    What does one do?
    When the hours in the day
    Leaves you wondering
    Wondering about the
    Dream that became real
    Hoping for the sleep to last
    Just a little while longer
    Yet it doesn’t happen.
    It never will.
    And when you do wake
    The heart is filling full from
    The desire
    From a reality
    That’s so far away,
    Yet so near in so many other ways
    What does one do?
    When you find yourself
    Hoping and wishing
    To make the impossible possible
    That connection
    That deep connection
    That has created a craving
    That is tattoo in the heart
    That will last forever.
    So does one just let it happen?
    What does one do?
    Or have it happen anyway
    What does one do?


    I just had to vibe a bit,
    Very awesome flow.
    Gosh you are so amazing
    Love favorite Son

    Peace~N~Love
     
  3. Bishop

    Bishop Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    you vibe very sensually
     
  4. LovesDestiny

    LovesDestiny Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I don't even know what to say! Have you been eavesdropping on my conversations? Is my phone tapped? LOL!!! Amazing doesn't seem to do this piece justice poet... Can't wait to read more!!!!
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This piece just melts the heart Bishop, with each line penned. And Bluewater, you caught that vibe and kept it going in flow. Wonderful.
     
  6. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    ok ok

    bishop

    don't fall to hard now

    lol

    peace brethren

    feeling you flow here
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    man i have no clue but to change path in her direction
    awesome drop Bishop
     
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    We find in life that...If we "grow" into love, appose to "falling" it tends to catch roots.
    Nice drop poet
     
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