Black Poetry : Falling Apart

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  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Baby, if I could sing my heart out. This would be my song, hoping it can reach you. Nothing else seems to reach you.

    My sun don’t shine no more
    The moon won’t raise
    Why is this world so cruel?
    The air I breathe is cold
    Got my body frozen in time
    I loved you with all I had
    I guess it wasn’t enough

    For my soul reached for you
    And you turned your back

    I can’t find the words
    That will release me
    Baby, I am falling apart

    Do you even know the impact you had?
    Who is going to sing to me
    When I can’t sleep
    Who is going to read to me
    When I want that stimulation
    No one can take your place
    When I am down
    You always knew how to pick me up

    I am not begging you to come back
    But I will welcome you back

    I can’t find the words
    That will release me
    Baby, I am falling apart

    It is like two coming alive to live one life
    The love we shared, the times we laughed
    The crying together and the vows we made
    Promise after promise…living hope
    You gave…

    We was so close, no matter the miles
    So how do you let go?
    Day in and day out my phone rang
    Now it don’t ring at all.

    I can’t find the words
    That will release me
    Baby, I am falling apart

    I play it repeatedly trying to understand
    Nevertheless, you turned your back on me
    Making me think the words you spoke…

    …… For my soul reached for you
    And you turned your back

    They say your lost but what about my lost
    Seems no one wins…


    I can’t find the words
    ….words
    to release me
    That will release me
    Baby, I am falling apart

    Baby, I am falling apart
    I am not begging you to come back
    I am not…
    But I will
    ……. welcome you back

    I can’t find the words
    ….words
    to release me
    That will release me
    Baby, I am falling apart

    I can't keep it together
    Baby I love you


    I will
    ……. welcome you back

    (C) 2005
    ~ROSE FIRE~
     
  2. kente417mojo

    kente417mojo Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Man MzBlkAngel, that was sad. Nice poem, just kind of dim and sad. Man, you got your point across. :crying: Thanks for sharing.
     
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    Monetary going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    Hi Angel'this is a very deep piece sis
    keep the flow flowing
    Much love
    Peace
     
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    very well felt piece
    deep as deep speak on !
     
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