Black Poetry : Fallin Rain

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  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    fallin rain pours in full
    as the storm comes
    closed eyes blind
    to the feeling heart in pain
    the burning kills as my love closes
    soul covers and the spirit fades....

    fallin rain
    cant seem to bare the pain because
    of you i am empty inside
    cant breath
    heart broken
    soul torn
    spirit walk off in the dark

    fallin rain
    walkin off without a word
    tells me i was never nothing
    if i was the love would of brought you
    to come and talk...
    fallin rain pouring pouring
    how could you do it to me...

    once upon a rainy nite
    i was your love..
    as you cuddle and slept like a baby
    carried the love in pride
    walkin that stride...
    coming back to reality out of a dream
    walking striaght into hell

    fallin rain...pour
    rainin like hell
    my own personal jail
    no way out this time
    the bottle of pills look good
    but i cant let it
    as i try to not hurt
    but its slowly killing me
    fallin rain
    let it pour
    let it pour

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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    sometime when rain pours
    we cover to stay safe & dry
    but some how pain seep in only
    to give light of a pathway to follow
    very deep felt scribe sistah the day shine will come after rain.
     
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    Monetary going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    MzBlkAngel....

    I'm sure if you share these thoughts with him...he'll at least give it serious thought. Hell, I would if I were he.

    :thanks: for sharing your pain, your sorrow, your sadness with us.

    :toast:
     
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    yeah down here in ga it rains hard down pours... like those of ur pain u express.. but only for a qiuck second.. and then its sunny again... so the sun will be out soon
     
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    i feel you Angel
    this was gut wrenching...

    just please stay away from that bottle of pills
    we need your poetic skills :wink:
     
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    Well we could sing: rain, rain go away, come again another day. But who wants the rain/pain to play see-saw with our hearts, it's raining now, so let it rain and move on. And if it rain hard...it won't rain long...it never do.
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    sunshine do come but only after the storm flows ova
    the rainbow comes...

    thank you all for the love
    Peace
    Angel
     
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    Oh my goodness, sister, this is so heart felt. You are in my thoughts and prayers, girl. Believe that.
     
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    awe sis i am ok just writting
    but thank you for letting me know u care
    Peace and love sis
    Angel
     
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    tight write. Your a good poet if you are able to master coming from the field at all levels.
     
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