Black Poetry : Fallers

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  1. WindWalker

    WindWalker Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    As spring emerges
    from winter's grasp
    robots in corks
    with chainsaws on their backs,
    believing they are still “men”
    trample
    the ancient woods
    and in their path
    the mountains echo the pain
    of giant trees crashing.

    This destruction
    at the dictates of greed
    takes away
    serenity and peace,
    yes, even life
    from these elder peoples
    turning this mountainous landscape
    into a war zone
    but unfortunately for them
    the refugees of this madness
    have no status
    at the U.N.

    If this madness and greed,
    is not contained,
    soon they will all vanish,
    swept away in winds of destruction,
    gone from the children
    of man and beast
    forever lost
    with no tomorrow.
    and
    who makes up the final endangered species
    when all the trees are gone?
     
  2. GQ

    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Very nice work WW!!!

    :peace:
    GQ
     
  3. Rashad

    Rashad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Deeeep Piece!!

    I dig It!!
    Tyte Scribe Poet!!
    Tyte!!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    I'M DIGGIN' DIS HERE RIP!!!
     
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    Hopefully I was feeling it right. Somewhat it seems, that you are advocating saving the environment but at the same time you are trying to save us from our greedy selves. Please enlighten me, for I have not the best of understanding. Yet I enjoyed the presentation, now tell me...
     
  6. WindWalker

    WindWalker Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Dear brotherman: You are right; I an adocating saving the environment and saving us from our greedy selves. Thank you all for your comments.