Black Poetry : FALL

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  1. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    COLOR

    Endowed...

    Mine,

    Quite a bird's view ~

    Summertime in decline

    Demonstrative FALL

    GOD overdue...

    Yet evident

    Close to midnight

    Winter on...

    Global warmed :flame:

    Slipping FALL

    Our survival

    Shorter days

    Fallen leaves

    Scavenged graves

    Woe and dread to our denial

    Eyes closed shut in brilliant FALL

    Heaven sent...

    While decadence implies

    We are what we have become

    Yea, you sure love to ball :juggle:

    But won't come to The truth

    Mother Earth has news for you

    As goes a seasoned Fall

    So too,

    Go the fate of men


    COLOR

    Becomes you...

    What's your world view?



    Darryl Abdu Omari :em4700:
    aka 1poetsought ~ copyright 2007
     
  2. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Amid such beauty, the universe is taking on an unfamiliar face. Yes, it all depends on how you look at it. Keep on bringing our attention to issues like only you can, 1poet.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    warm view as da face change multi ........i'm not color blind and aware
    awesome piece
     
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    Thanks for the warmth, and fuzzies.
     
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    :SuN049: Yeahhhhhhhhhh





    beautifulll...



    awsome and strong Piece..:flamet:








    Loveauroraflower:heart:
     
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    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you, Baby.
     
  7. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    dropping the jewels on us

    and questions to ponder

    brethren

    keep bringing the heat man

    nobody knows nothing until people start dying

    by then

    it will be too late

    keep the fire coming poet1

    peace
     
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    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    So'ja


    I concur,

    Thanks, So'ja :qqb011:
     
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