Black Poetry : fall

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  1. PoeticManifesta

    PoeticManifesta Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Fall



    Fall

    Not in love..

    But for me.



    Fall for my imperfections,

    Fall for the look in my eyes,

    when they land on you.



    Fall..

    Not in love,

    But for me.



    Fall for the dimple in my left cheek..

    for how strong I am..

    Until you make me,

    Unsure of me..



    Fall not in love but,

    For me,



    Fall for the imperfections,

    My secret jealousy..

    That’s not so secret.



    Fall for me,

    Fall for the time we spend entangled

    In each others web,



    Fall for..

    My heart,

    As it has for you.



    Fall,

    For me.



    Not in love,

    But in the possibility.

    Fall for me.
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Fallin
    not in love
    but for who you are
    da secrecy wayz

    yep
    Fallin
    for dat imperfection
    and each dimple of
    smile

    not in love
    but love each possibility
    from thy web we weave
    in thy hearts untamed

    fallin
    for you deeper
    not in love but the love of you
    just fallin
    day by day
    for
    da essence
    of you

    not in love
    but
    thy friendly hand
    FALL.......................
     
  3. nevar

    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    great collab by you two. keep them flo's coming.:darts: :)
     
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    Nice drop Sister Poetic
    Much Love on this fallen for you
    Nice follow up $$RICH$$
     
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    bigdrizzle Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    My PoeticAngel...I have indeed fallen...for u and this piece...



    Drizz
     
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    Beautiful girl!:love:
     
  7. PoeticManifesta

    PoeticManifesta Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Fell..
    whan I came,
    You were here,
    bring lots of joyful cheer..

    fell..
    Not for your face
    which you have never revealed
    but for your soul,
    n which emits whimsical words,

    fell
    for your avaitor,
    and his jiive smile,
    for your southern charm,

    fell..
    for your knowledge of hair care,
    possible mommas boy,
    silliness n witt...

    fell...
    not in love,
    but I landed here,
    right on top of you!

    fell,
    for a friends words,
    fell..
    for you!


    :wine:


     
  8. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Fallin
    for the warth of heart
    ya beauty at start
    not in love

    but fallin
    for your fancy wayz
    and da sweetness of maze
    fallin deeper
    in ya grace
    as i seek dem eyez
    ya face
    not in love
    but
    the strong hold
    of
    friendship
    kinship

    see i've fell
    for u
    ya comfort too
    fell
    upon ya soul
    a queen of gold
    i just fell
    don't pick me up
    i wanna stay beside
    u like protection
    fell
    not in love
    but ya
    tenderness
    sweetness
    warmness
    gentleness
    i fell
    today.........
     
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    that was nice sister PoeticM
     
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    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I see sistah PM has gotten brotha Rich to "fall" undah her poetic spell :)
     
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