Black Poetry : Fall Into Me

[sweet apple*pie]

I drop bread crumbs to my heart

But will you follow?

Or simply eat of my bread and run…

Your home is a lonely one

The lights are on

But the door is locked

I sit outside of you and knock

Rain pouring, but answer you not

For lonely’s love is the one you’ve sought

For a long time now…

It’s become a part of you…..

…..I see through the shadows of you

I’ve observed your open plains and grooves

I’ve watched how you move….

Yes, I’ve watched how you move

The fluidity of your motions

You have nothing to prove

For your footprint speaks loudly

And it’s where ever I go…

Written on the tablet of my heart

Between my rib and my soul….

I watch from the shadows…

As the stones in you glow

Setting my heart afire

As the milky waves flow..

And flow and flow….

Off a cliff, you pretend not to know

Into the waters of me..

Magical pools of mystery

That you are curious to see…

Why do you fear thee?

Let go of Lonely’s hand

And fall into me​

 

[j'hiah]

um um um... i don't know which line(s) stood out the most.
your initial approaches and imagery are on time with beginners like "... i drop " , "...i sit ", "... i see " and "... i watch", very clear that you feel like you are the company my dude needs and who can resist a sexy spiritual poetess??? Like Keith Sweat begged, ~ nobody ~

 

[Da Street So'ja]

well

i'm following crumbs
to take the whole loaf
i can see you too
and your vision of hope
just like you
barack the vote
you command respect Queen
you ain't no joke

shadows come to the light
illuminate the night
to behold your sight
yes
it all feels right

no fear of thee
who wouldn't
want to say
yea
that's a Queen
next to me
treating you like royalty
girl get out that rain
my heart will cover you
like a canopy
treating you with
love and respect
like you're family

 

[asimplepoet]

I loved the flow of the orginal drop. my sister. and i also love the flowback my brother

 

[Bishop]

I will follow wherever you wish to lead
like a moth drawn to a flame
I wish to be with you every second
your love is what sustains my life
Lonliness is a slow death
but you offer me life & love beyond my dreams
and now I will take hold of your hand
as we drift off to our promised land.