Black Poetry : Fall Into Me ( Part 3 ) Finale

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  1. sweet apple*pie

    sweet apple*pie Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I thought I heard a whisper

    A small voice said “Come In”

    So I flung back the door, and there he stood

    As I greeted him with a grin

    He invited me in for coffee

    And a sticky bun covered in cinnamon

    I questioned neither his motives nor fears

    As my eyes made love to him


    He showed me pictures of his children

    His eyes brimming with pride

    I studied his look intently

    He’s devotion to them made me cry

    My eyes wondered around the walls of his home

    Lonelys scent drifted by

    Her fingertips touched on everything I saw

    Her dust on tables and blinds


    I took hold of his hand, and said very sweetly

    My dear friend, you have nothing to fear

    For it is a must, that I remove lonely’s dust

    I’m here to kiss away your tears.

    His heart wanted to believe me, and his eyes did too

    As my intensity reflected like mirrors

    Very still we sat on the couch, he and I

    Frozen like two lovely deers


    As the ice magically melted, his heart thawed too

    And slipped his hand out of lonely’s firm grip

    He got close to me so I could feel his warmth on my face

    There he tasted the honey of my lips

    His breathe became heavy, and he swallowed very hard

    Placing his shaking hand upon my hip

    We stood up and danced around the room like lovers

    Thirsty for one another, but taking sips


    I whispered to him “ I’m yours for the keeping”

    And said “Will you please have me??”

    “Will you set my world on fire?” My eyes begged of him

    My heart hungry for his answer to me.

    He grabbed me around my waist, and pulled me tightly in

    And said “Yes, Angel, most definitely”

    “I will say Good-bye to Lonely my Queen”

    I’m now ready to Fall Into Thee
     
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    It was i whom u hear

    the sweet whisper in ya ear

    beyond ya smile and soft grin

    my heart pounding from within


    offer my space and my time

    how i lone for to be mine

    yet i not know of thee

    but i open myself willingly free


    As i stumble cross the room

    from da sweet hush of silent tune

    intently i listen to ya heartbeat

    eyes wide shut i say have a sit


    we yet know of this visit

    but clear dust from lonely mirror

    wash away the salty tears

    devotion lay within da cares

    as i allow u to kill these fears


    sweet melodies play our song

    as we dance and get it on

    eye 2 eye we stare

    holding handz wit tender care


    That's when i fell into u

    fell like it was a tabu

    opening my space for u

    so we become one of two

    doing what lovers do


    no need to look any more

    i'm ya king ya lover uncore

    what i bring is deep in store

    i heard u knock upon my door

    now u in stay and while

    yes as i answer u wit a smile

    :10600:
     
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    sweet apple*pie Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    aww...sweet flow rich...real sweet flow...

    yeah...this gentlemen....very special indeed...
     
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    see what u made me say !......u better stop it ...
    this was so good it took my pen right in couldn't help myself
    awesome sis thankz for allowing me to get loose.
     
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    It's about time he realized what he was missing out on.
    Great write sis
     
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    This was like a scene from a romantic movie, very sweet and tenderly flowed.
     
  7. Clyde C Coger Jr

    Clyde C Coger Jr going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    In the Spirit of Sankofa!





    watzinaname,

    I can always depend on you, watzinaname, always! What sweet apple*pie is doing is pure torture to me, and I am certain to many other romantics. That is why I must take a break, as I told you, my loyal and understanding Friend, I love you watzinaname, meanwhile apple is killing me with this! (I know you remember, I thought nevar was in trouble:))

     
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    sweet apple*pie Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I didn't make you say anything you didn't want to friend ;)

    Thanks JDN, and for your loving support of this 3 part series...

    sigh Watz....even I was a little emotional at the end of this....wondered to myself could this love be real... Thank you Watz for your continued support of this this flow.


    Yes Clyde...I will admit, as I told Watz above, even I got sad at the end of this...romance like this seems....gone at times...one can only hope, that somewhere out there it will be found... such a treasure that many take for granted....
    Thanks so much for your support of this trilogy.

    Believe me when I say, that I understand you completley, when you say you must take a break from romance....I myself had to walk away from the pen...
    :bye:
     
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    sweet apple*pie,

    Thank you poetess, but now do you understand why I say thanks but no thanks:)?

     
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    sweet apple*pie Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Clyde....

    yes friend, I do. I edited my comments, please have a look.
    You can lean on my shoulder, love...I'm here for you.
     
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