Black Poetry : Fall Into Me (Part 2)

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  1. sweet apple*pie

    sweet apple*pie Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I knock outside your door

    I dare you to let me in

    Dare you to let me inside

    Behind the wall you hide

    Quit looking at me through the peephole

    Show yourself, for I have already seen your soul

    Seen your heart of gold

    Seen your spirit, a garnet rose

    Emerge from the shadows

    You prance across my heart on tip-toe

    As I remain still and watch you go

    Round and round me

    To an excuse haven of why we can’t be

    Mesmerized in the breath I will provide for thee

    Oxygen bubbles to your minds capillaries

    A tropical storm you will want to marry

    If you just take the time to see….

    To see

    Love can’t be found in your backyard, my lovely

    Sometimes you must travel outside of the gates of ya city

    Into a new town

    Where a diamond can be found

    Waiting to sparkle only for you

    But lonley has you prisoner

    What am I to do?

    I simply stare lovingly at you,

    Pretend to understand you,

    As I stand on the porch of your heart

    Do yourself a favor

    And tell lonely your through
     
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    Will U Marry ME???? Aint no sense in letting this thing go on.....I fell into you already...
     
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    In the Spirit of Sankofa!




    sweet apple*pie,
    :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown:
     
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    sweet apple*pie Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Well allow me to pull you out of the deep waters, so that I may stare into your eyes.
    he he he...


    Thank you, Sir Clyde, I'm most humbled.

    :em2900:
     
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    jus_dat_nice Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    He better let you in after all that
    :bowdown::bowdown::bowdown::bowdown::bowdown::bowdown::bowdown:
     
  6. Clyde C Coger Jr

    Clyde C Coger Jr going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    Yes..Most Welcome, and You are a Queen, that's what You are, sweet apple*pie !
     
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    sweet apple*pie Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    JDN...you would think right? Naw girl...ima have to come up with a part 3.


    Many Queens reside here at 555 Destee Rd...JDN, 4EverLove, coco, roxanne...just to name a few....
     
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    That is true about the many Queens, but I have addressed only you, sweet apple*pie.

     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    If there u be at my door
    my heart opens for what's in store
    u say marry and bath into souls
    then allow me to say come in
    that diamond indeed can be afar
    this why i fly cross roads of cities
    as i embrace ya tropical storm
    of warmth and beauty
    cometh in please knock again !!!
     
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    As I read this, I thought of destiny, and a love that is meant to be. I know of a couple people who met online, and thru the miles met in person, and now live in wedded bliss. Very lovely write.
     
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