Black Poetry : Fall Back

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by soulful2006, Jan 8, 2007.

  1. soulful2006

    soulful2006 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I...........hand.......you...........no
    Admission of guilt
    I don't live with the filth
    That is your existence
    I have been forgiven for the sin of loving a fool
    For in my youth I acted the way I was supposed to
    So now I Guess that meant I actually was in love with you
    It comes as no surprise that I can not trust
    that you understand
    So allow me to spell it out for you
    U R N-O-T my man
    and you never will be again
    So for the record to end all unknowns
    this house right here you are not to call your home
    I don't live for today and
    I break bread for tomorrrow
    So I can prosper
    with you there was no accomplishment
    You never knew what it meant
    to be the truth to let me love you
    But it's all ok
    I never wanted the burden anyway
    So goodbye
    I'm all out of cash because, obviously your love was not a good buy
    You like the play on words
    I just did that to make sure I was heard
    I'll check you when you come get your things
    Not in a box to the left ?
    try on the front porch steps
    in the mean time in between time you don't call me
    Wait for me to call you
    In other words
    Fall back
    You know into that whole you crept out of
     
  2. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Well if he didn't know, now he knows. We live, we learn, we move on. On point write.
     
  3. choclatangel

    choclatangel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    uh oh do your thang poet, I love it. You had me reading this out loud preaching in my bedroom. :D
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    let it be heard surely one knoweth now .....word up !
     
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