Black Poetry : Faithfully

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  1. Mr marion

    Mr marion Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    When it smells good
    Looks good
    Probably is good
    Your love is too good
    to try it

    When I get thirsty I will come to you faithfully

    When I get romanced
    entranced
    half stance
    I will simply walk away

    When I get caught up
    turned on
    enticed
    I will remain honest

    When those times come
    when others come
    I will come home to only you
    faithfully
     
  2. Heartbeat

    Heartbeat Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yesssssssss! Beautiful, strong and nice.

    BE
     
  3. alyce

    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    there it is!

    beautifully, beautifully done!!!!

    a
     
  4. Mr marion

    Mr marion Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Be
    Alyce, Thanks yall .. This is fresh from the press.
    I had too many drinks last night
    found myself on the wrong side of town.
    I got in a cab and did the right thing!
     
  5. Rashad

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    Nice Mr Marion

    I feeling this.
    Thanks for the read.:)
     
  6. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Mr M.


    ...have i eva told you--

    that i love what you do? 'cause i do! :)
    your work always has a real & honest
    feelin' about it... like you're sharin'
    your self with me/us. Thank You!!

    AlwaysLove.
    SunShyne~
     
  7. Mr marion

    Mr marion Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Chronicles

    that's what they are GA_Sunshyne
    chronicles of my being.. It's all that I can really write about.
    The truth... Thabks for the read


    Mr M~
     
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    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yeah Mr. Marion!!!!

    You spoke volumes here brotha!!!!

    :peace:
    GQ
     
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    Reason Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Marion

    Gotta give you love dog... Strong Peice!

    Reas
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    MR.M

    just too sweet & very beautiful
    ya heart is into it all .....well said poet!:D