Quiet Poetry Lounge : FADED PICTURE

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Mirror image of my last

    smoke gray dem of da past
    faded picture not so clear
    yet hold depth da eyes may fear

    Different notions as i move left
    even when i make the two step
    all i see is me standing there
    faded picture there i stare

    Holding this motionless image
    da face of everlasting cast down
    what's seen is my truth
    now this picture here is on da loose
    Holding this broken smile and frown
    :qqb009:
     
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    Oh my $$RICH$$-NESS:
    Please don't frown.
    Just turn it upside down.


    Much Luv
     
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    Such sadness in this write, we must have some semblance of hope to proceed in life. Feeling this write, but I believe with a blessing your reflection will turn into a smile.
     
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    4EVERLUV i'm trying to get a grip and turn it up but it still face down thanks sis

    WATZ.... sometime in life the messures are so great that u can't see clear thankz sis
     
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    smh...Like Brother:qqb009:....smh

    Great Flow $$RICH$$
    The Telling of the Image
    Sometimes that image can be gastly....smh
    Sometimes it is the spirits making the mind see itself...as one to not pride...smh
    Flow on Bro
     
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    yes it sure can sis thankz for the visit inside my mirror
     
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    I see only me in the faded picture like an mirror image of self sadly abound and tied
    where did da clear picture of happiness go ?
     
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    keep a smile in your heart.......dear one.
     
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    Thank u surely i will as tyme pass me by , i know tis will end and i will see much clear
     
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