Quiet Poetry Lounge : FADED PICTURE II

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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    I see u there ova looking my face

    da image of my self out of place
    nothing there just a void space
    searching for my inner grace
    still un-sure this life i trace
    like a faded picture in smoked film lace

    capture'd in this lonely maze
    heated moments of feverish blaze
    yet i look up in a daze
    working myself past this faze
    da image issue my mind now raise
    beyond da history of birth dat's stage
    upon me of self inner rage

    O' mirror mirror looking glass
    how long do i stare, will it pass
    is it me or someone's mask
    what is it of me u wish such task
    ruptured eyez thou image last
    quickly i turn away in a dash

    I am obliged within tis mold
    da nook and crannie of my soul
    i don't see u any less in fold
    yet delt this image my eyez stroll
    it me faded picture i'm so told
    tis da story my life been sold
     
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    The glass in the mirror has many facets, the clouded image you may see today, will emerge into a sparkling gem the next. Still feeling your words poet.
     
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    $$RICH$$

    She will feel this regardless of the distance or the miles.
    Love travels thru the air.
    She will catch the vibes you send her.

    [ Have you ever heard a mother .. say or
    think about a child and communicate
    thru the air over the miles ] ​


    I feel ya on this flow man.
    Looking at the fading memories.. how long will it last?
    Can the relation be restored to the level it was.

    Naw ...you should always take it higher
    Higher than it was before
    Everyday increasing the level
    And letting the love intensify
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Thankz watz maybe within the image is a time share of hope in da morrow

    it's da goal of me to see it through and bring forth a better day , staying strong
    thankz bro.HODEE
     
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    Makes ya sad....Sometimes the image can be so much so vivd yet so complex.
    What is it you may want me to do? or how did I get here....or Where do I go FROM here.....oooooohhhhhhhh I here ya bro...I hear Ya...
    Flow on

    ...brother

    Things Do COme better...Like I said...the spirits...they are strong...but you are too.
     
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    Thank u my dearest sis.......
     
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    yet i'm still upon da wall in a faded picture ....
     
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    revisit da mirror
     
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