Black Poetry : Faded cradles..

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  1. Auroraflower

    Auroraflower Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I,m done with tha kids,
    i was apposed by make-believe exhibitions..
    man whom let their emotions lead their heart ,and not their heart take the

    lead.....

    or let them be guided by the Holy spirrit...

    Not even to mention "Choice".

    I,m afraid that i lost my pounding for my attendent comtemperary is gone...
    The One "'who is not from this world "'cause i,m not going for woldy thangs in a relationship..
    the man that loves to love and dream and have faith..
    and who is not afraid to melt ....aware...

    and you know what hurts me the most ...
    is their end seremony..
    ''lets be friends "' and or "' i will always love you "'..
    aww man give me a break you dont know what ""love "'is
    GOD Is Love! its al in there ..
    and real love stays...
    but go a head continue youre search jurney...
    just take youre self serius while youre on the road..
    some of them came to me with an Excited buzz..
    about "'soulmate "' "'i found you "' ..some even Got the nerve with tha "'i want to marry you"'....:bully:

    WELL come On than now ......:em2300:

    oeps uhh gotta go:ghost:

    and no shrinking from the toutching and the i want to kiss you ..
    more and more...
    but getting to know me :10500:
    oh no...there you jammed on the brakes "'she might come out with a full dress:qqb015::SuN030:
    ...."wow for real man this girl is ,...for real man"'..

    um....helllo dude...
    yeah...:10500: i ""DONT make Jockes about this thing..

    tearfull i go on and take my time and make shure that the root of the soul is being outcast before...the new soul comes in ...
    and somthimes it takes years...
    because this woman does not want to :whip:play a game or mess with someones emotions ...but still some plead me guilty .....
    my records are with God ..
    end of trial..

    it takes time cause only the hand of God can heal those wounds of dissapointments,..
    Some people ask me after another passenger..."'are you still not over that GUy"' i tell them ...uh...no not realy and the reason why it takes time is
    because i Don,t give myself easely ...and i dont ""fall in Love "' that often i do choose to "'love someone"'
    this might sound contra...
    what i mean is..
    Didnt "'Jezus said these 2 will become One "' Didnt God said that...
    so i take that serouis...
    "'One flesh"'

    So i dont want my soul and body to be ripped in 2 ..
    in to manny pieces..

    WAkE UP Fooks...!

    stop this nonsens...

    I dont like freeStyle...!




    so whats my bad ..
    cause i must to sumthing wrong.....

    well you know whats my Bad..

    You know whats my Bad!
    You Know whats My bad!..

    You know whats my bad!...






    manny things....!





    but i dare.......








    to Love!


     
  2. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wonderful piece sis, I always enjoy reading you...thanks for sharing this.
     
  3. Khasm13

    Khasm13 STAFF STAFF

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    yeah....it takes some longer cause their soul is stronger.....
    felt this....

    one love
    khasm
     
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    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    interesting layout...

    but the message is deep. to love deeply...is to love fully. that's not something to be turned on and off at a whim. and the recovery process is a journey of its own. LOVE NEVER DIES...it simply transforms. DARE to love...in the way that you love...FOR THAT IS THE ONLY WAY THAT ONE SHOULD LOVE. whole heartedly.

    the river floweth
     
  5. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    well done as i relate sis....nicely said.
     
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    asimplepoet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I can truly say that understand this from the inside out. This captured it all. Nicely done.
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    very nicely posed i can understand where you are coming from thank you for sharing
     
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