Black Poetry : FADED AWAY tooooo FAST

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    she fell fast
    fading away
    no need to fake
    my name ain't jake
    i was not on ricky lake

    I was home all alone
    no call no tap at da door
    slowly but continuely i
    walked the wooden floor
    tore a whole in it
    coz she's not wit it

    now my mind wonders
    as my heart pounder
    who's foolin' who !?

    fading away fast
    will this last long
    was i wrong
    did i belong
    I really wasat home
    last night just like tonight
    didn't take flight
    felt no sight
    dark .....blind
    bump to the door walking da floor
    wishing now !:rolleyes:
     
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    Wow $RICH$.....

    You brought this emotion alive
    I was feeling the words in my mind......well done!


    Epiphany :heart:
     
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    ePIP...............YA know

    she be down and out
    before love starts so i be
    just wishing big ....................Thank u:heart: :kiss:
     
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    YOU SHOULD HAVE NIGHT VISION!

    YOU SHOULD HAVE NIGHT VISION
    CAUSE YOU MADE YO DECISION
    RIGHT OUT IN PLAIN SIGHT
    YOU CHOSE WHAT YOU FELT
    WAS RIGHT!
    LEFT HER HANGING IN DOUBT,
    FEELING WITHOUT, WANDERING
    ABOUT, WONDERING ABOUT,
    THINKING ABOUT, CRYING ABOUT
    YOU.

    YOU TURNED OUT THE LIGHTS SO
    THAT WE ALL WOULD LOOK THE SAME
    BUT WE DON'T
    GIVE IT A NAME
    DOING DAMAGE CONTROL
    HAVE YOU LOST YOUR SOUL
    ARE YOU MAD INDEED, WAS IT JUST
    PLAIN GREED, WHY DID YOU NOT
    HEED?
    WE HAD PLANTING STRONG
    SEED. I HAVE GONE NOWHERE
    MY LOVE.....
    BUT OUT TO THE BACKYARD
    WHERE THE SERVANTS ARE OFTEN
    RELEGATED TO TAKE THEIR EVENING
    MEAL AFTER SERVING MASTER
    YOUR CHOICE WAS A DISASTER
    YOU CHASING EVERYTHING
    WHAT ARE YOU REALLY AFTER?

    YOU NEED NIGHT VISION, CAN'T SEE
    WHAT'S RIGHT IN FRONT OF YA
    I STILL BELIEVE IN YA
    IT'S THE FEAST I DON'T TRUST
    AND WHEN THERE IS NO
    TRUST, THERE IS NO US!
    I STILL WILL FEEL YO VIBE
    EVEN IF THE LOVE DON'T SURVIVE
    I STILL OFFER MY HAND , EVEN
    IF YOU OFF IN LALA LAND
    TAKE A STAND, CHOOSE WHICH
    HAND, I MAY BE NEEDY, BUT
    SHE JUST GREEDY, NO CONTENT
    IN YA HOME, MAY CAUSE YA TO ROAM...
    YOU SHOULD HAVE NIGHT VISION!!!!!!!!!!
    msLuciousb 2001.......(one day and counting, what ya gone do)
     
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    Reason Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Rich

    Im waiting patiently for you and msluscious to drop a collab...

    You know it was tight
    Reas
     
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    Reason surely we will

    man i's gonna be hot !
     
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    msluciousb

    now i see whats ment to be
    as my flight no longer cloudy
    i can see whats for me

    my vision of night is like
    a radar beam of light
    the feast of confussion
    is a myth of trust
    see with me is a us

    welcome to my compassion
    sit inside the fire of my heat
    and see my heart beat rapid
    coz i be ready
    :D
     
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    HEY BABY!

    Hey baby!
    What took ya so long, got me dressed up for nothing
    sitting by the phone.
    Downtown Chicago , but now I am out of the loop.
    I ain't lying baby cause you make me wanna shoop!
    Come on baby and give me a call...........
    I'll be waiting for you big smile and all!
     
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    chicago base

    is the place see my face that u trace
    meeting at da board long day work
    broke down but headed back to the
    groove move in a few......hold up!!:rolleyes:
     
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