Black Poetry : FADE..(This World)

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  1. Nita

    Nita Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :jumping:

    I'm tryin hard to leap obstacles
    out to wreak my brain
    the madness so insane
    How some folks they show no shame

    :angel1:
    whether you
    lie
    cheat or
    steal
    I understand, keep it real
    but jus know when to chill
    Wont ya holla if ya feel.........meeeeeeeeeee

    :nono:
    This world
    No respect
    So MEAN, CRUEL, and COLD
    People dare to get checked
    Being BIG, BAD, and BOLD
    AND OUT WE HAVE SOLD
    and the mankind that I behold
    lackin wisdom and understandin
    even tho they're growin old

    :uzi:
    kids killing kids
    violence steady growin strong
    Taking weapons into schools
    From plain site within their homes

    :argue:
    Adults can't get along
    A picture painted all so wrong
    the hungry go unfed
    and the homeless without home

    :cry:
    Wars being fought and tears of fear
    tho the reasons STILL unclear
    Weapons of mass destruction
    All along they were right here
    deep within self
    a world full of wealth
    but lack of wisdom causes death
    or be a Hazard to your health

    :(
    Death of mind
    SOUL
    and Body
    Good God Almighty
    jus wanna tell somebody
    when will we rescue our own

    :crying:
    Don't want this world to get played
    Not knowing it's purpose
    and reason for being made
    goin thru life jus wanna get paid
    or to be the one to lead the parade
    Learn to give more love more
    Be the BIG joker in Spades
    Make a difference in peoples lives
    So our world wont simply FADE :sand:

    Fail
    Altogether
    Drowning
    In
    Error
     
  2. turtle1

    turtle1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    HEY!!!!

    DANG GURL!!!!!!!
    U DIDN'T TELL ME YOU FLOW LIKE THAT!! QQ
    MUCH LOVE TO YA!!!!!!
     
  3. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    speack on
    POET OF DA WEEK
    tight drop
    indeed
    Peace
    Angel
     
  4. Khasm13

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    aiight big joker...lol
    dang...and i just thought you was da poet of da week....
    tyte one sis
    one love
    khasm
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was so thought provoking and well written, flow on poet of the week.
     
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    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    very deep dear sister
    feeling this piece
    flow on poet of the week
    Peace
    BlueWater:heart:
     
  7. Nita

    Nita Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Ya feel me

    I never know what I'm going to write...I jus try to do my best
    Thanks for showin me so much love
     
  8. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yes this is a heaped up world we live inbut...as the bible says: AS IT WAS IN THE BEGINNING...SO SHALL IT BE IN THE END. hard to believe right? but "Ms. Poet" in the beginning we were "QUEENS and KINGS",
    so true...babies are killing babies but we can't stop and we cannot give up on the young...they are "their" future...
    if we all continue to pull together...strenght will come.
    your inner beauty...bursts out from you.

    here's luv comming your way...queentswana :look:
     
  9. Nita

    Nita Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    To the Queen

    Thanks sis...
    yes we have to pull 2gether, that's the only way were gonna win back our youth and our world.
    Thanks for the beautiful words sis... :heart:
     
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