Black Poetry : fact of the matter

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by karma55, Feb 15, 2007.

  1. karma55

    karma55 Active Member MEMBER

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    Be positioning myself in danger
    In the hands of strangers
    Promise makers
    That never comes through
    Making wishes that never come true
    Dreaming dreams I never pursue
    Scared to admit I aint got a clue
    But let’s face facts,
    I’m wats keeping them amused
    And let’s take stats,
    They win I lose
    I am wat I choose
    Make note of who I was
    Cause change gone come
    Reinflation of my lungs
    And recreation of my air
    My heart and mind are in it
    And my demons no competition
    For wat I have envisioned
    Premonitions of living life
    Overruling your first decision
    Right to your opinion
    A companion cus you doubt me
    So focused on who I am
    Who would you be without me?
    Wat you don’t know about me
    Is that im bigger than my body
    Thought you could murder my soul and leave it out for rotting
    Throw a couple blows but im not comfortable on the bottom
    So im fighting back
    Trouble on my mind so I'm writing that
    Imprison me ill survive where the lifers at
    Could quit and give up now aint no pride in that
    Fact of the matter is as a matter of fact
    I’m wide-eyed towards my future aint no looking back
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    welcome Karma55 to destee.com poetic playground
    welcome to the house of poetry ufould
    welcome from above the peace & respect
    welcome within kin like dat as i bless this some love

    very well done and no looking back is a key nice reading you
    and do look to feel ya pen more in the future , show love as
    love is shown from within of poet's
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You speak of self doubts and an uphill climb, but you remain the victor. With such positive determination, the sky is the limit. Welcome to Destee.com, look forward to reading more from you.
     
  4. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hi Karma55
    Welcome, welcome:spin:
    I like your style of art, it speaks volumes of Maat.
    We're very glad you're here..make yourself at home...because you are!
     
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