Black Poetry : Facing Me

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  1. Dior Robynsonne

    Dior Robynsonne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I never
    questioned the uncertainties that
    ran rampant in my mind.
    In my mind you
    were true and
    pure,
    intense, secure and even
    sure.
    You proved to be
    a woman's epiphany,
    You were the 'light' in
    a dim world.
    You became what many
    sought.
    There wasn't a doubt left in my mind
    that you were the one.
    A true ole skool gent,
    full of love,
    compassion, poetry and
    imagery.
    Some type of
    artistic prophet.
    I fell under your
    weaved spell
    and you left me feeling all shades of
    woozy and unbalanced.
    I didn't care.
    ...But there was a flip side to your
    beautiful outside.
    When the lights came on and the
    magic of the candlelight was
    banished,
    I realized that things don't always
    appear as they seem.
    What I had been staring at was merely a
    conjured illusion of what I wanted,
    and now with the lights on,
    I stare in the mirror at myself,
    the person I've come to dread.

    Copyright 2004 Anno Domini/ "Suga Shack" Publishings
    ~Dior X. Robynsonne
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    wow dis was awesomeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
     
  3. Dior Robynsonne

    Dior Robynsonne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks man, I was hoping that many would understand where I was coming from. I appreciate the love.
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This seems to be a tale of coming to terms with self, with all its imperfections. Never too late to try to change. This was deep.
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    you on fire aint ya
    this was a tight drop
    Peace
    Angel
     
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    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    whoa, this is crazy deep. I hear ya, I hear ya
     
  7. Dior Robynsonne

    Dior Robynsonne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Watz, Angel and Gemp, Thank all three of you for your purity and love. I'm slowly but surely getting out of walking according to self but walking in the divinity and reflection of God!!!
     
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    sometimes that reflection
    is not one we recognize...
    the deepest sign of all
    self reflective signs is one
    of non-recognition of self...

    feeling this...
     
  9. Dior Robynsonne

    Dior Robynsonne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you so much honey.
     
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    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    hi Dior
    You have indeed
    painted a wonderful canvas
    of thoughts from within
    in this beautiful flow
    Peace`n~Love
    BlueWater:heart:
     
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