Black Poetry : face memory

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by thespokesman, Mar 29, 2004.

  1. thespokesman

    thespokesman Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    What’s the deal
    We used to rock bars
    And lines between
    The scene was u had a man
    I got a girl cuz I thought u wasn’t feelin me
    And dat girl I had beside dat
    Was to hide that
    Pain from being a lonely man
    Young
    I just wish I knew ur feelings at time
    I would have
    Brung
    The unsung love I wanted to give u
    But I was young
    And money and hoes
    Was my unsung hero

    I admit
    I always wanted to get a piece
    But it was much more
    I was blinded by the allure
    And I wish I could of lured the courage
    To come real
    Tell u leave dat man u with
    He ain’t doin shhh
    For u
    Cuz every time u seen me, u saw u
    In the reflection of my face
    Upon your face
    Just face
    And put to the front
    Zone
    Faced facts
    I had an act
    If I could I’d take that back

    Rewind time, what would it be now
    A year since then, two almost
    People ask me, what happen to…..
    I say we still cool, u left 4 anotha school
    But we fell off since then
    i hit u on your hip
    weekly
    I been strong
    But a memory I had
    Makes me feel weak-y
    And I had to tell I this
    Before anotha step
    Breath
    If I breathe
    Maybe fo eva u leave
    I’m done with magic cards
    My feelings naked
    Ai’nt no sleeve
    So u can believe
    Yo fleece
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    now u laid out a piece that say hey indeed
    tyte drop as always man ....i like how this was done
     
  3. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yea, what could have been, if only...I like the way you put this together.
     
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