Black Poetry : F

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Ikoro, Sep 8, 2006.

  1. Ikoro

    Ikoro Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I F'ed myself,
    When I F'ed her that night.

    She was manipulative,
    But truth is - I didn't even try to fight.

    That F was my first and last.
    It's an ugly memory I hope will stay in the past.

    I F'ed myself
    When I F'ed that creature.

    I became a sinner
    Although I try to be a preacher.

    I F'ed myself..
    But I also F'ed my soul.

    I was torn up inside
    And out of control.

    I F'ed myself,
    But most importantly, I F'ed the keeper of my heart.

    I F'ed with my black heart,
    And so she tore it the F apart.

    I F'ed the honour and respect
    Of being a Melaninated individual.

    But everyday I work F'in hard
    To erase any F'ing residuals...

    So for F's sake,
    Please listen up.

    You must -never- EVER
    Scheme to FUCC.

    ~Ikoro
     
  2. IfUComeSoftly

    IfUComeSoftly Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i ____ up trying to be real
    with surreal individuals
    trying to rationalize with
    many irrational people
    i ____ up giving pink to
    someone who did not
    deserve to be in the
    same room with her
    i ____ up by not listening
    to my heart and what
    she knows is true
    i ____ up when i didn't
    tell how how i truly felt
    when i all i wanted was him
    I use to be ____ up but
    i was given another chance
    in the calm, cool, collectiveness
    of me and the connection of us
    I use to be ____ up but now
    I'm free...

    nice drop poet... flow on...

    softly
     
  3. SmoovVerbiage

    SmoovVerbiage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    "I F'ed myself,
    When I F'ed her that night.

    She was manipulative,
    But truth is - I didn't even try to fight.

    That F was my first and last.
    It's an ugly memory I hope will stay in the past."

    those lines there I enjoyed the most.

    The things we do and the moment we're through in creeps regret.
    I like how "I" accepted responsibility for his part in the encounter
    Some people have a tendency to blame others for their regretable actions.

    nice write


    Softly, that was a good piggy-back-flow


    SmoovV
     
  4. Ikoro

    Ikoro Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks ever so much for the replies.

    Ifucomesoftly, I really like your forum-name :) Also, sweet write you dropped there.

    SmoovVerbiage, I must admit I also had my eye on your forum-name since the first time I saw it. I'm steady working my way through the poetry here, looking forward to your stuff. Glad you enjoyed the read. Yeah, it's a bad memory... oofff. Thanks again.

    One.

    ~Ikoro
     
  5. sweettee29

    sweettee29 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    THAT WAS ON POINT IKORO

    LOVED THE CONCIOUSNESS OF THIS PIECE TAKING RESPONSIBILITY WHERE YOU F'ED UP

    SWEETTEE29,LOVE
     
  6. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Do yourself a favor and always think twice,
    did you know it takes just "1" f*up to end your life?
    For a thrill that last what? ..maybe a minute or two?
    and the next thing you know..your whole life is through!

    Then ask yourself a question, like..who's fooling who?
    when you f*up that "1" time...will it fall back on you?
    The one you f*up with, ..may not have been grand,
    but I bet she was put there by the hands of a Man!​


    This piece was indeed hot, I liked flowing with it..thanks
     
  7. spicybrown

    spicybrown Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    F'in good poem. I like the way you posed this creative piece

    ;)

    :picture:
     
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    sonnee01 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Oh Ikoro..... you flowed here!!!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    under the F this was tyte ....