Black Poetry : f r i c t i o n

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by hypersleep, Mar 30, 2001.

  1. hypersleep

    hypersleep Member MEMBER

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    The heavens I grace are hers.

    In a huff of pleasure I wake up
    in her days, immune to the reality of
    unimmortality.

    She parts space as I move through,
    diving bird plunging in
    mid morning air, unconcerned that I'm
    late to leave.

    Late because I am slow in her motion.
    Dreamily walking, propelled by
    our exposed mental fiction
    that's like exposed metal friction

    What other Goddess is such the Star?

    This is necessary,
    the movement,
    the thoughts,
    the pain.
     
  2. GQ

    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hyper,

    She will be pleased with this piece no doubt!!!

    Great work fella!!!

    Peace
    GQ
     
  3. StarGoddess

    StarGoddess Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    *blush*

    hyper baby....
    I...
    I just don't know what to say...

    you leave me speechless and humbled
    my heart beats your name

    always
     
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    StarGoddess Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    repost

    huh? wat?
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    tye drop here ...........
     
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    Straight from the heart
    Much Love Poet