Black Poetry : F.O.R.E.V.E.R (Our 7 children)

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  1. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    unrehearsed tears stained her beauty
    pained for me so I would not hurt
    she changed into a garden that grew
    new tomorrows and gave birth to an
    array of possibilities of what could be

    placed responsibilities on me to raise
    the offspring through the winter to see
    what we should cultivate in the summer

    maybe we'd have love we could
    instill values in / teach how to
    skip rope and skip sorrow
    lay in the center of a field where the
    wildflowers are free and exist to just be

    maybe

    experience gestation periods of 1 minute
    conceiving letters that spell our future
    F.O.R.E.V.E.R

    and have 7 children that we name with
    one letter

    (c)2001 blakverb
     
  2. hi-wa

    hi-wa Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    verb.....

    i haven't really been around long, but this is
    one of the finest i've heard. your words
    really put the mind to work. where did this one come from???

    nice piece.
    hw
     
  3. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    yeaa

    verb

    you are a true poet

    i lovedided it

    you my dawg man

    DSSNY
     
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    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    DSSNY,

    again thanks brother. When we gone run through that fire together man, cause you know it's gone hit hot up in here.

    blak


    Hi Wa,

    thanks for the reply. ya know sometimes I don't even know where these pieces originate. They just "become".
     
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    bro', forgive me for not being in the room as much but i have been in the meadow reflecting. this piece is a true inspiration to many and i am honored to experience this one...

    twin, continue to bless the room for i shall be back in full flow soon...
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    verb

    dis here is a footnote to live by
    man i love how u came big tymes;)
     
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    UbZoRbShUn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    and he caught all seven of
    my
    unrehearsed tears
    sealing them with
    seven of his
    magnificent kisses placing
    them in seven individual
    crystals that we both
    placed in our hearts
    on seven different occasions.....


    Can you tell?
     
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