Black Poetry : Eyes Write

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  1. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    EYES WRITE
    ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
    To fantasize ~
    My pretty,
    Know that nightmares,
    Are for real

    To look into one's soul
    Is to see,
    Darkness revealed...

    Wherever light has been
    It illuminates a toll...
    The price to pay for vision,
    Is the costs involved with love

    We've been took... you and I
    By a book on grandiose chat
    Lending credence to the impression
    That we love those whom we back

    The truth is rarer air,
    Where, few flock... or seem to care
    Whereby, eyes write solutions
    To the problems stated here



    1poetsought ~ copyright 2003
     
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    lpoet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    To look into one's soul
    Is to see,
    Darkness revealed...

    that was my fav part

    nice work

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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    beautiful flow untouched here ......scribe on poet !
     
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    We've been took... you and I
    By a book on grandiose chat
    Lending credence to the impression
    That we love those whom we back
     
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    daya Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Only if my soul had a flashlight may be you could see in at night....
    and for you to see what's really inside me is greater then my soul
    itself.......
     
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