Black Poetry : Eyes Won't Water

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  1. tysto

    tysto Member MEMBER

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    I heard what happened to your daughter.
    My eyes won't water cause she shoulda
    been smarter.
    Plus you shoulda been taught her bout
    the temptations society has to offer.
    You lost her.
    When she started falling you coulda
    caught her.
    But you was too busy making up useless
    excuses.
    Now you feel the effects from the pain
    death produces.
    She only wanted attention,
    so she cried for help.
    Ended up helping herself.
    Her picture sits on the shelf.
    Put there as a constant reminder to make
    you remember this whole dilemma,
    where nobody would be the winner.
    Your baby girl crumbled under the weight
    of the world.
    To feed the hunger of the habit she
    traded her pearl.
    To try to calm the killer craving she
    gave up her mind.
    She couldn't keep up with the fast pace
    state of the time.
    You continued to never care.
    Your concern was never there.
    Love is a level you never let her share.
    And that's all you had to give her.
    You wouldn't try to deliver.
    So I just can't cry you a river.
     
  2. MORE

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    don't expect sympathy
    not from u, not from me
    somewhere inside she craves
    a shoulder
    shudda , wudda, cudda
    the game is over.

    niceeeee i felt that fa real!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    she weep but don't mine it
    she shoulda been more open
    now it's not my problem !!
    she didn't listen
    so quick to jump
    now she's at lost on her rump !
    i don't feel sorry !
     
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