Black Poetry : Eyes that Spy

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Afridancr, Apr 5, 2001.

  1. Afridancr

    Afridancr Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I know you're Watching me
    now, tell me...
    Do you like what you see?

    Don't answer based on External,
    Converse with Me first,
    learn my internal
    thoughts~
    feelings~
    of
    love~
    anger~
    disappointment~
    achievements~
    dreams and desires~
    joys and pains~
    Everything about me and my life to YOU
    I'll explain

    By all means, interrupt me if you find my past
    a strain...
    strain on your mental ear
    pierced by the knife of my life
    desiring not to cause you strife
    But share All of Me with You
    Sincere and True
    for
    Me and You.

    Your eyes are Watching as
    your soul gazes into mine...this
    moment in time is...Divine I
    search
    ......find
    ............feel in my
    Heart and Mind that
    You want to free my soul
    break down these walls...
    brick per brick
    Exposing the...
    True Me and
    all the Love I have to give
    Unconditionally.

    As you gaze into my eyes
    you're no longer surprised at the
    connection~chemistry this...
    spiritual entity that...
    entices you to...
    WANT to know ME
    unveil the mystery of
    Afri
    Ami~nata

    Hey YOU...Yes YOU!!! You who's been Watching with those
    Eyes that Spy...
    don't be shy
    give it a try
    Promise I
    won't lie I...
    KNOW you're Watching
    let me share my world with YOU
    under the moon and the starlit
    sky.

    My eyes are spying...
    awaiting a Watcher's reply...

    (c)2001EssenceofAminata all rights reserved
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    AFRI YA SEE ME WATCHING
    I FEEL THE DEPTH OF U
    I LEARN THE MOTIONS
    I KNOWLEDGE THE PAIN
    YET I SIT STILL ALL THE SAME
    I LISTEN INTENTLY AS YA VOICE SPEAK
    NOW I KNOW AS I WATCH U SOME MO!
    U SEE ME SPYING FROM MY SKY
    LOOKING LOW
    I FELT THE WARMTH OF YO BEINGS
    I KNOW THE SPRAY OF YA COLOR
    I TASTE THE RIPPLE OF YO SOUL
    THERE I HOLD IN THOUGHTS
    I BEEN WATCHING U...........$
     
  3. GQ

    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sistah Afri...

    G watches and he waits!!!

    Hella nice piece!!!

    :heart:
    GQ
     
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    Reason Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yeah Im Watchin!

    Don't answer based on External,
    Converse with Me first,
    learn my internal
    thoughts~
    feelings~
    of
    love~
    anger~
    disappointment~
    achievements~
    dreams and desires~
    joys and pains~
    Everything about me and my life to YOU
    I'll explain

    Really felt this hea! you know you gotz crazy talent poetess... digg ya consistency in droppin hits!

    You know it's tight!!!
    Reas
     
  5. Afridancr

    Afridancr Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    loves light in flight

    $$RICH$$
    Can you see me? I'm watching you too! Keep your eyes open cause there's more of me to come!;)


    GQ~~
    I hate to keep you waiting. Stop watching and start doing...come here sexy!!!;) Thanks a bunch for the read G!


    Reason~
    You know I'll always love you right? Friends for life...365x's infinity...can you feel me?;)


    Much loveN'respect to you all!!!!
     
  6. Street So'ja

    Street So'ja Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    afri

    you touch my soul all the time
     
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    Watcher Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    From the Watchtower
    I watch
    the way you flow
    I watch
    the way you love
    I watch
    peering into the depths of your soul
    I watch
    the formulations of ideas and inspirations
    I watch
    the tears shed
    I watch
    the joy felt
    I watch
    when you are all alone
    I watch
    even when you think I'm not here
    I watch
     
  8. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Afri-

    well done sis, as usual and to think not to long ago you were new to this (I remember). you've come a long way (as if you had far to go)

    one love,blak
     
  9. dnommo

    dnommo Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    well done dancer of AFRI...

    as awlays i enjoy your scribes...this one especially. check back on the post you made on "Letter to the poets of Destee" for you have mail

    i'm prayin for you...
     
  10. alyce

    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this is

    perfect poetiks!

    Enjoying your passion! :)

    A
     
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