Black Poetry : Eyes On Me

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by LyrikalShe, Jan 15, 2004.

  1. LyrikalShe

    LyrikalShe Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    eyes on me
    lingering
    painting indelibly
    images of rapture personified
    on ventricular easels
    tucking away
    watercolor washed
    photojournalistic memoirs
    in atrial chests
    to be buried
    then resurrected
    on lonely nights
    by winelight
    and closed lids
    never knowing
    i was
    with the same intention
    cataloging snapshots
    of his face
    his hands
    the tattoo over his heart
    and of course
    his
    eyes on me


    c. 2004 Brandi N. Rainey
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    indeed watching u
    this was awesome flowing
    let the ink continue to flow
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Vividly expressed...I liked this.
     
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    i missed your flows gurl...
    nice to see your back :)
    one love
    khasm
     
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    Antar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    eyisiee

    i got nothin by dry sockets
    if you a bottle, i buy rockets
    the moves you make
    i watch it
    catalyst develop
    elements edible than clits
    hardcore as opera gets
     
  6. LyrikalShe

    LyrikalShe Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    $$RICH$$

    I'll try. Thanks much.

    Serenity...
    Brandi
     
  7. LyrikalShe

    LyrikalShe Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I'm glad you liked this one. Thanks bunches.

    Serenity...
    Brandi
     
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    LyrikalShe Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    It's good to be back. Thanks for the luv.

    Serenity...
    Brandi
     
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    LyrikalShe Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Daaaaaang! I likes that.

    Serenity...
    Brandi
     
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    Very Nice Lyrik..

    Nothing less than picture perfect.
    Eyes on you.

    Feeling your flow, everything you do.
    Blessed spending time, with you.
    Picture that.
    No cell phone interrupt, busy clocking with eyes on thee.
     
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