Quiet Poetry Lounge : Eyes of the Beholder

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by NDeep, May 12, 2003.

  1. NDeep

    NDeep Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    In the eyes of the imprisoned
    he was wrongly accused by his imprisoners
    But unless the chains of his imprisonment were forged with injustice, he will not be free

    The eyes of the disgusted cannot shed light on the disgusting
    Unless the disgusted has the courage to stand for the truth
    and the rightous indignation to correct the disgusting

    In the eyes of a child there is only innocence
    Until it lays eyes upon the wicked, and the wickedness
    Seeps into the child's eye and settles like morning dew on his heart

    The eyes of the deseatful are full of trickery and manipulation, which can only be cleansed with Holy eye drops
    found only in the Spirit of the All Seeing Beholder

    In the eyes of the Warrior, he is the saviour of his fairy tale,
    but without an honorable mission
    he is a reckless vigalanty

    The eyes are the windows to our soul
    What does your soul look like?
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    wow!!
    deep flow i really like reading dis it speaks within
    (what does your soul look like)
    hummmm!! how the doors open
     
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    whoa! Ndeep that was so real. thats leaves one thinking. love it!
     
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    NDeep Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Had me thinkin too. I had to look into the mirror, Deep into my eyes, and all the way down into my soul....
     
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    "In the eyes of a child there is only innocence
    Until it lays eyes upon the wicked, and the wickedness
    Seeps into the child's eye and settles like morning dew on his heart "

    Eyes see you do what you do!
     
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    that was truly deep. u r truly blessed with the gift of speach. that one will make people examine themselves. thanx 4 sharin
     
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