Quiet Poetry Lounge : Eyes, Head, Heart.. Eyes, Head, Heart

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  1. PLATINUMILLITY1

    PLATINUMILLITY1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I need to speak to you
    Regarding Some things
    My Eyes
    Head
    And My heart
    My Hart....
    My Hart.
    Well my eyes are pretty well
    Of course I've always worn Glasses
    and it's always been hard to see
    Well far at least...
    But....no not the Astigmatism
    Me.
    My eyes are fine regularly
    Umm...Its what I see
    I am have a Little trouble
    Seeing its hard to explain
    I'm trapped in a dungeon
    Of another outerplain

    Im just scared sometimes
    to even close my eyes

    Oh....yes
    My eyes head and Heart
    My Hart
    My Hart
    Well my head Isnt normal
    In justifiably tormented
    Oh no...did I say tormented
    I am just unable
    To gather myself at all
    It has dreams I do not welcome
    And laughs when I fall
    Hurts when I call
    It's aches if I smile at all
    I tried extraction
    Literally pulling from my head w/ my hand
    I like thinking until it interrupts my plan
    I'm not sure who's in there
    Do they wanna take me
    I don't think I'm finished yet
    I thought It was made for me

    My eyes are in cahoots with my head
    Always making me Cry

    Yes.... Yes
    My eyes My head and My heart
    My dear heart
    My heart is the best part of me
    It speaks and I listen
    I speak and it loves
    It beats and I thump
    I know there has been a problem
    Every since our episode
    It is just beginning to recover
    Just regaining the Red
    But every time she tries
    A knock start to arise
    Then there goes my eyes
    Giving my heart a Surprise
    My heart needs rest
    So my Hart can begin
    Working on this project
    We all got in
    My eyes and my head know
    Because they Rage and Pry

    My head gave My hart
    A gift of death and demise
    My hart can remain in conditions so
    Simply unbearable
    Man sometime I don't even know
    But me and My heart are strong
    though we cover up through out the day
    In attempt to not let anything else
    Corrupt inflame our future
    But my hart is on 2 verges
    Im working on the gain
    I know I'm okay
    After all we are strong and
    Coming to you
    It's just My Heart and Hart have been trying
    To fight and resist my eyes and my head
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    interesting mental play that took me on a ride
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Working as a team, our eyes, head, and heart integrate and we're at ease. Working separately, we're in total chaos. Well structured scribe poetess.
     
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    PLATINUMILLITY1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you Guys.......Very much
    Peace........
     
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