Black Poetry : Eyes Closing To Death...

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  1. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i'm in the hospital with some bottled up feelings...so here they are...theres no certain flow...just what flowed through the pen on paper...




    EYES CLOSING
    SLIPPIN’ INTO A DREAM OF FEAR
    OF DEATH SO SEVERE
    THE POUNDING OF HEART
    AMOUNTING TO THE LOVE OF ART
    TO WRITE
    TO SING
    A START, WITH NEW BEGGININGS
    SLIPPING INTO A RING OF FEAR OF FIRE OR THE LIGHT
    CAN’T GIVE UP WITHOUT A FIGHT
    FOR THE FEAR
    THIS FEAR
    THIS DESTRUCTIVE
    OVERWHELMING
    ANXIETY OF FEAR
    ****
    I’M SO SCARED
    I’M DYING IN MYSELF
    WILL I BE SO IMPAIRED?
    FROM THE PAIN AND THE RESTLESTNESS
    THE CHEMO AND THE RECKLESSNESS
    EYES CLOSING AND I DROWN
    WHICH WAY?
    UP OR DOWN?
    UP TO GLORY TO JOIN MY STORY
    THE ANCESTORS OF MY MOTHER
    THE SMILE OF MY GRANDMOTHER
    ALL THERE TO MEET ME
    ALL THERE TO SEE ME
    ALL THERE TO GREET ME
    BUT THERES STILL MY FAMILY
    WHAT WILL HAPPEN WHEN I CAN’T BE
    HERE ANOTHER DAY
    TO CRY AND EASE THEIR PAIN
    EYES ARE CLOSING TO ANOTHER RHELM
    THE ONE THAT GOES FOREVER DOWN
    DEEPER INTO THE EARTH
    FROM THE HEAT OF BIRTH
    SELF DESTRUCTION
    FATAL INTERRUPTION
    SCREAMING
    YELLING
    PAIN
    SWELLING
    THE WRECHING ANGUISH
    AND HEART WRENCHING CRIES
    OF THE FALLEN IN ANGUISH
    AND SUFFERING SIGHS
    CLOSED EYES, NOW OPEN
    AND I LOOK AROUND
    I’M NOT UP THERE AND I’M NOT DOWN THERE

    …YET…

    I’M IN THE HOSPITAL

    AND I’M EVEN ALIVE…
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    humm! indeed
    da lovin spirit always near

    tyte scribe ya in a zone
     
  3. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks alot rich...i just have so much on my mind now...i don't what to write and all i can think about is death.....
     
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    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    any more input? i'd really like to know what people think of this...
     
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    WOW, I love this girl!
     
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    Lovely, this was beautiful...you're still uplifted in prayers!
     
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    death shall pass da door ......
     
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    I'm gonna PM ya.
     
  9. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks everybody and liquyd thanks for the beautiful PM...i'll be writin' u back VERY soon...
     
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    what if death was the door to a new beginning
    a beginning of eternity
    Where you sleep a short while
    Just to awaken to everlasting life
    without aging, sickness or that disease we call death...
    Well that's what I am preparing for
    Yet to be awoken
    I must become pleasant in the eyes of the lord enough for
    him to remember me
    then I can be remembered by him
     
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