Black Poetry : eyealreadyno

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by hi-wa, Nov 20, 2002.

  1. hi-wa

    hi-wa Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i already know i dig u
    your mental is so strong
    it grabs me, and pulls me into your
    space...with stars, moons, and
    knowledge beyond belief
    i'm in so much grief due to the fact that
    i jump'dthegun on this one.
    but i couldn't help it
    only in each other's head for a couple of
    weeks, i'm weak to ya vibe
    u scribe so nicely, but quite frankly
    the wild (natural) hair look kills me ever time
    gettoclassi is how i like to describe u
    to the fellas
    of course they can't understand,
    they just think "ucute" justifies nature's experiment in u
    but i constantly
    tell em "she's reality's riddle"
    not really meant to be
    understood, but beaUtiful in every
    way imaginable

    so i quietly use a screen name
    to hide my temptations
    and write lines for u in elation
    hoping you'll pick up on the hints
    i leave behind . . . but u should already know
     
  2. A007

    A007 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    AIGHT AIGHT....HIT HER WIT A FEW MORE OF THOSE AND YOU WILL BE IN THERE LIKE FASHION WEAR.....TIGHT THIS FLOW BE
     
  3. Twofish

    Twofish Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wow... digz this no doubt...wish it was me almost :)

    1:heart:
     
  4. Desert Storm

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    HEYYYY!!!!! This was a nice one! I really enjoyed this one .... Unique Tight scribe
     
  5. hi-wa

    hi-wa Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks A007 for the read bru. stay in.....
    2fish, it just might be. :)
    DS, glad u enjoyed also. preeciate the read.

    ya'' come back nah.

    b.e.z.
    hw
     
  6. elayne.

    elayne. Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    hi-wa.


    hmmm... kinda got a sistah wonderin'...
    ...nahhhh... nevamind!
    i liked this one tho'... a very lot!! :D

    itsallLove, chile.

    elayne.
     
  7. hi-wa

    hi-wa Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    it's good to wonder. ain nothin wrong wit dat.
    ain mad at'cha. kinda the way i felt when i read yo
    piece to, til u said u alread confessed. oh well, maybe next time.
    stay in...

    b.e.z.
     
  8. LiLi

    LiLi Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i just love these peices!! this is tighter than...well..tight...lol
     
  9. hi-wa

    hi-wa Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    glad u like. always good
    to get responses like that.
    keep ridin the hi-wa.
    stay in.....

    b.e.z.
    hw
     
  10. Natasha

    Natasha Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    see now this is a love letter ! !!!!

    Much love on this
    Natasha :heart: