Black Poetry : Eye thought

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  1. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I thought eye understood life
    maybe I should have saw what resided
    over it a bit more

    I thought

    I thought eye lived life
    that breathing was the only
    prerequisite that needed to
    be fulfilled so I could see
    life's course

    I thought

    I thought eye
    if eye could see in between
    the words I write that if I
    wrote down what eye saw
    I would be relieved
    and that release was the answer

    I thought

    eye thought that if
    I smiled enough
    laughed enough kept
    everyone around me
    happy that it would
    save mine

    I thought

    I thought
    free resided within
    each exhalation of my pen
    then again my

    pen thinks too much.

    (c)2001 blakverb

    *okay fam. It's been along day for a brother. My thera"pen"
    session is over.
     
  2. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    If the pen don't work~

    then try a pencil.......!

    This is tyte! Then again, you already know!!

    Oneluv.
     
  3. cocobutterskyn

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    Great poem, It's deep. Wow! you're good. Coco
     
  4. Afridancr

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    I thought and thought and thought...

    and I find myself still

    ~thinking~

    you are a genius!
     
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    See the pen does free us
    I thought-Dam good Poet
    I loved this
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    man i thought so too but i see it's not true
    this was tyte joint here Verb...................
     
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    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i thought about this and i come to the conclusion i like this flow on poet.:kiss1:
     
  8. Passionfruit005

    Passionfruit005 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    very nice, i was liking it from beginning to end
    words that inspire thought, do ya thing
    holla back passion
     
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