Black Poetry : Eye*ronically

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by thepoetsean, Dec 30, 2001.

  1. thepoetsean

    thepoetsean Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Ironically
    It’s funny how
    Life be...
    It’s funny how life be
    Life be
    Slippin from up under me—
    Love life liberty
    Be
    Finding me and—
    Leaving me—
    Where i stand sit pose—
    Kiss live breathe—
    Think see smell
    Contemplate...
    It’s funny how—
    Sean seems secure with himself—
    Laughing joking living—
    Inside dying—
    Suffocating praying—
    For cease fire inside he
    Be
    Cause
    He see
    Life be—
    Ironically
    Slippin from beneath he—
    Love life liberty—
    Leaving he looking befuddled—
    Exasperated at such a
    Sitaution—
    Stunned...
    Gasping for change—
    Grasping for thangs—
    Not seem by blinky third eyes—
    But eye open mines wide—
    And see...
    Ironically—
    Life be—
    Slipping
    Life be slipping from under me.
    Seriously



    Itseemsthangsfallapartandshatterwiththebreakingofmylaptospitemyuprisingyetstillistand

    espeemanifested
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    man i feel ya

    life offer us the darkside of less light
    dis be ryght & tyght coz we seem to
    slip away before our own eyez ....:eek:
     
  3. UbZoRbShUn

    UbZoRbShUn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    every time I start to wonder

    where you are you appear. "tospitemyuprisingyetstillistand"

    Continue to stand even when you have no strength
    Continue to stand when you got nobody but you
    Continue to stand when your feet hurt like hell and the weight of the world is pressing down on your shoulders
    Continue to stand and I will stand with you


    ONE
     
  4. Reason

    Reason Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Top Notch Sean

    Stay on top of the game dog! Tight Scribe

    Madd Respect
    Reas
     
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    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sean

    SeanthePoet.......ThepoetSean.........

    Still got it goin' on! :D

    *wurdplai* :wink:
     
  6. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    POET - peace

    you read some of those old responses to your work they still apply

    slow it down, dun
    you WILL be alright

    it's time it takes time
    be patient you WILL get there

    Peace
    my brethen

    DsSnY

    and a happy one 2002
     
  7. thepoetsean

    thepoetsean Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanking the fam...

    RICH, Zorbie, Reas, N2, and DSSNY(my bwoy), thank y'all for all stop to read what i had to write. I know that it's been awhile since i posted, but i promise not to be a stranger...iight???

    fa'sho

    seyallsomewherebetweenthoughtsandreality

    sean

    :nuts:
     
  8. UbZoRbShUn

    UbZoRbShUn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    sean

    now you know good and well Destee's has a revolving door...... and I ain't gone say nuffin elze
     
  9. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thepoetsean...
    I see you still repping for us "seans". One of the good things about writing is that sometimes when enveloped in the process of creation "the answer" pops up to what it seems is out of nowhere. giving one a starting point to rebuild that inner strength, I speak out of experience. One of Gods many gifts he gives to us are the "tests" he provides to build character and our inner strength. life's not slipping brother you are just getting stronger. well written poet.

    "10"

    blak
     
  10. thepoetsean

    thepoetsean Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    glad i'm repping for the 'seans'

    glad you are too. thanks for the read bruh.

    sean the 2nd

    :nuts: