Black Poetry : EYE Q's

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  1. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Like somewhat of a 'peeping tom'
    looking out of his windows
    in through and beyond hers
    he read a private letter...
    entitled "Dear Lover"
    that she had not shared
    with him at all...

    The letter was spray painted
    over her mental walls
    as a recollected scene

    When rapid eye movement
    told tales and the likes
    of her that he had
    never knew she even dreamed~

    From his eye view
    he thought of her
    as just a friend -
    someone to share
    fun times with
    and short-lived
    romantic intimacies
    ....every now and then

    How else was he
    supposed to know
    that Amber Suns
    so lovely
    mirrored visions
    of 'forever' through
    chocolate looking glasses
    seeing Amber's-Chocolates
    as a double image
    observed clearly in
    her 20/20.........

    Considering all
    sides of questions
    in his careful watch
    he surveyed and scrutinized
    the entire 'dear lover' letter
    and all of the
    writing on the wall -

    He examined and inspected
    her in his own eyes--
    ...colorblind
    by the feelings of
    his own fear and hesitancy

    He closed his windows
    and pulled down the shades
    of periodic suspension
    on his own
    consciousness
    just as the Amber began
    to shine bright

    For he was uncertain, and
    afraid...
    as he knew
    chocolate would melt
    undearneath
    Amber
    Rays
    of
    Sunlight~~


    (c) 2001 SOULOFASISTA
     
  2. baller

    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    reading...reading...

    and rereading...as i meditate on the scores of distant lovers and others basking in the warmth of amber rays from across far-reaching gulfs and gaps that must be bridged...one step at a time.

    peace.
     
  3. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Baller~

    Thank you for reading me today!!
     
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    thank you for letting me
    peek inside

    :heart:

    Destee
     
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    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Destee~~~

    Sista, you know you
    are more than welcome!!
    Thank YOU!!
     
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    GYPSYMAN Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Its true...we can only run 4 so long...sooner or later we must commit ourselves to the "Amber Rays" of anothers soul
    ...melt ..and be reformed again.. am I right to guess ..
    this is a neverending process ? You have challenged me to ponder today.. deeply. Thankyou my friend.

    On a continuous journey
    GYPSYMAN
     
  7. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    GYPSYMAN~

    Bing, Bing, Bing...
    I'm lovin' your AWARENESS...
    thank you for sharing your
    insight for the SoulurN2...~~!!
     
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    Bowing down to your royal skillz,,,,,,Queen N2 ,Queen N2 all hail your lyrical name! Dope!

    one love,blak
     
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    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I should be the one bowing...

    but, instead I'll settle for my
    private read....and lesson!!

    :heart: ya' sweetie, you're too much
    for the K.I.D!!