Quiet Poetry Lounge : Eye of A Warrior

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Shortyreal, Sep 18, 2003.

  1. Shortyreal

    Shortyreal Member MEMBER

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    * I'm a warrior, no surrender I Will fight till the end* and one of my Duties is to raise sons to be men* in a Land where many say they kill just to Survive* yet the realest can just speak And the wise stay alive* so what's wise? A wise man does well in his fathers Eyes* wisdom is the principle the foolish Will despise* the righteous man liveth And the wicked will die* and any fake Or hypocrites are quick to tell a lie* Now I can be a thug as if I'm at the Prime of my youth* but I ain't got time For games, don't be hatin cause I'm Spittin the truth* cause I'm hater proof* Makin haters bounce back just like I'm a Bullet proof vest* But I got much love For all you brothers and sisters tryin to Do your best* gotta have finesse, tell me How can you keep it real when you ain't Got no heart? * Get on your knees and Pray to God cause that's the best way to Start* I pray you feel me, cause I know Everybody alive got a soul* change this Triflin life and get it right and your Destiny shall unfold* to all my ghetto Children hold your head soon sunshine's Gonna come* yet we see even Elementary students steady totin a gun* We're fightin for life here, though this Ghetto it seems ain't got much life in Store* Just keep your head up all you Soldiers, and remember we're in a war - Shortyreal 03'
     
  2. luvNwords

    luvNwords Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice work.....good flow
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    this was tyte ya scribe was on hit
     
  4. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice flow
     
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