Black Poetry : (eye) can't figure out

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by thepoetsean, Apr 17, 2001.

  1. thepoetsean

    thepoetsean Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    mmone


    you are.

    l o v e l y

    because "lovely" was not the proper length.

    (eye), I that is...

    love your loveliness--

    i love when the wind speaks to your hair--
    thirty minutes before the sunset--

    my unconcious--
    stands etched against the beauty--
    the...
    inequivicle

    s i l k i n e s s

    of your being...

    and i just can't figure out--

    why I can't

    have




    you.


    love,

    wurdplai.
     
  2. GYPSYMAN

    GYPSYMAN Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    SHES GOTTA BE A "DIMEPIECE" MY FRIEND...YOU PROVOKED A MOOD WITH THIS FLOW...THINK ILL GO FIX MY WIFE SOME DINNER LIGHT SOME CANDLES RUN SOME BATH WATER TOSS IN SOME OILS....U KNOW THE REST...

    BABY !!! *me callin' my wife*

    One !

    On A Continuous Journey
    GYPSYMAN
     
  3. thepoetsean

    thepoetsean Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    love is love

    thanks for the replies.

    wurdplai
     
  4. MADDRAPPER

    MADDRAPPER Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    (Peep)

    this was too short just as i was getting into this it finish up on me but niceness in the little i did read so proceed to bring it
     
  5. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    SEAN....

    i fall in love more & more... every tyme i read this!

    it is incredible... spectacular!

    AlwaysLove...
    Sunshyne~
     
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