Black Poetry : Extremely well done

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    ova lap of cluster
    sweet as pie
    dip in honey
    baked in perfection
    cooked to a moist
    she was a treat
    the main choice

    brauty in her eyez
    i feast to a
    yum yum !!!
    her taste was
    like strawberries
    with cool whip on da side
    inside da creamy center
    was a hot lovin fillin'

    erotic juices drip
    as it boil ova
    once heated
    it bounce in sway
    hypnotize
    cross my tongue
    all mesmerized
    ready to eat

    hot baked
    golden
    spiced
    in rum
    yummy yum yum !
    the roundness
    swell faster then a beat
    up on da table
    look at dis treat
    extreme mad flava
    mixed in one
    ready i want some
    mouth watery
    eyez in a maze
    now my body
    set as i crave
    da curves of
    this joy
    hot sticky & sweet
    not cotton cady
    but melt in ya mouth
    like m&m's
    leave a splash
    i tell ya i want this @*$
    extremely hot while it drip
    two cups low making a sip
    when i'm done i know
    by da screams

    it's a gem not a stone
    alwayz cooking all alone
    like diamonds it glist
    like sugar gran
    better then candy cane
    leave an essence of
    pure delight
    a twinkle done just right
    so late night i ask to feast
    who can bring me such treat??

    tell me, tell me now!!
    before my face become a frown:)
     
  2. TheGoldenChild

    TheGoldenChild Member MEMBER

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    i'm hungry now
     
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    I can!
    yummy yum
    lots of fun and indeed it's sweet
    in the center at the core there's a creamy treat
    temperture past boiling
    panties i'm soiling
    f**k it maybe i'll just slide them off
    body heat a 100.4
    can't barely stand posture so weak
    appetizer is ready come now eat
    body is sweaty
    breathin is heavy
    need someone to save me from this exotic wet dream
    inside theres a storm brewin
    organs are stewin
    Is there a doctor in the house?
    oh no! I'm feelin a drip about to spill over
    all over myself
    a state of emergency. Can you cum help?
    i'm holdin it in not ready to release
    come on! now hurry to get your piece!
    ohhhhhh! its such an agonizin pleasure
    the depts of this dessert I can't even measure
    If you make it here quick you can determine my fate
    mmmmmmmmmmmm! never mind, I think you're to late! lol
     
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    never late
    hey wait
    i want it hot
    on my plate
    let da spills
    thrill my soul
    as i watch it unfold
    like a sweet butta roll
    don't pass it in pieces
    allow me to have it whole
    sticky & wet erotic treat
    mouth wartery
    ready to feast
    don't cum yet
    it's not to late
    LQQK another check mate
     
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    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i really like this......****.....
     
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    lovelyGoldenOne.........Thank you very much
    ya wordz ring out in my heart every time u speak
     
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    blackwizdom Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    making my stomach growl.... tight flow
     
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    Thankz blackwizdom......it's a treated feast
     
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    This sweet sticky thang was all that-


    ova lap of cluster
    sweet as pie
    dip in honey
    baked in perfection
    cooked to a moist
    she was a treat
    the main choice


    1poetsought ~
     
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    you amaze me brah...
    keep the sugar tooth...
    peace
    khasm
     
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