Black Poetry : EXTRAORDINARY MEASURES

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Tis taken step of my heart

    has been more pain from da start
    crossing measures like miles
    just to render your flashy smile

    Has taken a total in my space
    and left a sad look upon my face
    if only i knew there was no grace
    for my love of such inner lace

    I've tryed every extra Ordinary measures
    to give and bring you great pleasure
    and yet u still fold under madness and greed
    mentally my mind cry as my heart bleed

    I'm not the fairy of happiness
    but i am a man wit togetherness
    I'm not da avatar of your choice
    but i am that i am by voice

    U act as of da youth in revolt
    unable and aware of da picture i stroke
    da image seen is transparent of colors
    through them we could be lovers

    I'm drain from all these extra ordinary wayz
    it's like running through life's crazy maze
    where every turn there's a nasty blaze
    see u i no longer crave

    These measures is yours not mines
    i'm sure a new lover would accept my shine
    and not hold me back like i'm death nor a crime
    as u can see i'm not blind
    da tyme has come for extreme measures
    bye bye !!!



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    I love how you went through extraordinary measures to tell it like it is/was. Excellent flow as usual.
     
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    sometime things have to happen to wake u up to see
    measures out the ordinary.......thankz sis
     
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    You penned this well like a thought of what I feel very nice write Rich enjoyed
     
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    In the Spirit of Sankoda and Real Truth!

    EXTRAORDINARY MEASURES...every time



    I'm not the fairy of happiness
    but i am a man wit togetherness
    I'm not da avatar of your choice
    but i am that i am by voice



    That's it right there $$RICH$$...for real! Speaks for me, lol

     
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    thankz sister Angel2 happy u like


    hey Clyde big ups bruh !!! measures that is not ordinary
     
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    In the Spirit of Sankofa and Real Truth!


    Yes sir brother, the real deal, for real!

     
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    OUCH...

    there's no call like a rejection call to wake someone up. i think she heard you, $$RICHMAN$$. continue your journey, my brutha. PEACE.
     
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    big ups brother Baller good to se ya too
     
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