Black Poetry : Extra,Extra read all about it.

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  1. Blkthunder

    Blkthunder Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    We got the world on the edge of their seat
    Not knowin if the human race will meet defeat
    Nations against nations, Religions against religions
    Heaven frownin down wonderin what will be our decision
    Evolutions at the crossroads of time
    Psychosis permeates the mass mind
    Snipers, terrorists and bombs
    Entering days read about in Revelations and Psalms
    Gone is the respect for human life
    Here we stand on the edge of a knife
    Species are dyin
    Who is tryin ?
    Trying to fight in rain forest wars
    Yet they're obsessed with dinosaurs
    And while cloning sheep
    Dark forces creep
    Across the land
    Making puppets of many a man
     
  2. SHAKA ZULU

    SHAKA ZULU Member MEMBER

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    DO TELL I SAY.NICE THAT YOU HAVE A WATCHFUL EYE.KEEP THAT COMING BY.
     
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    lpoet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Trying to fight in rain forest wars
    Yet they're obsessed with dinosaurs
    And while cloning sheep
    Dark forces creep

    another short but reall good piece like the line above

    keep um comin thunder
     
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    Monetary going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    Blkthunder

    Biblical...hmmmm or down right metaphysical....

    Nice...very nice.

    Keep it coming....

    :toast: :D
     
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    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Welcome and Thanks for Sharing!

    Great job and welcome we love new folks, come on in and make ya self at home!
    Blessings on Ya House!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Blkthunder speaketh on ya well heard
    i'm watching from above .........flow on poet.
     
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    Blkthunder Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you for the love
    I'm tryin some new things
     
  8. Bishop

    Bishop Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    speak the truth prophet!!!
     
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    herlove Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i love the way u worded this piece. what i call non- confrontational it poetically spoken a poetic voice, vision and choice
     
  10. Blkthunder

    Blkthunder Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thankx Bishop
    thankx herlove
     
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