Black Poetry : Extinction of Capricorn

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  1. mzpoetic8705

    mzpoetic8705 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I’ve begun to accept the absence of you
    Allow my mind to sit still for a minute
    I just can’t fathom the extinction of this being
    Whom I felt was true
    It be true, it is not
    It is not true
    You mean it isn’t true?
    A lie I was fed
    A four-course meal of bullsh*t
    Was served by some fella I felt was true
    I allowed you to exist
    Made a permanent home in my arms
    You’d lie
    Telling stories of how you and I
    Would be as one
    And in a second it was done
    Gone
    Never to be heard and said again
    I reminded you just in case you forgot,
    You love me
    Do anything for me
    Call me if you need me
    Needless to say, I call but it rings
    And it rings; rings and slowly I release the phone
    Do anything?
    Rather do nothing
    A [email protected] thing you’ve done but give me
    Thorns in my pen
    Can’t ever write a poem without referring to this again
    ***** a poem
    There is no beautiful way to say…
    You hurt me
    Fu*ked me over
    Dissed me
    You know like
    You said hi and before I could return the favor
    You had already moved on to the next
    Dissed me
    You dissed me
    You screwed me over
    And I will never
    Did I say never?
    I meant BY NO MEANS
    Allow you in again
    You’ve overstayed your welcome
    You are no longer wanted here
    A sign has been posted in my head saying
    [email protected]*holes don’t enter!” here
    You dissed me
    Said you and I would always be
    And “wifey” I was to you
    Even tried calling me baby but it just didn’t fit you
    Babe
    Right babe?!
    No WRONG
    You aren’t my babe
    You are non-existant in this world
    An alien
    A square
    Loser
    Someone I could care less to be next to
    Can’t even stand to breathe the same air as you do
    Like that one kid in school who never wore deodorant
    That’s who you are to me
    Ashamed to be in your presence
    Humiliated when you acknowledge me
    WHO ARE YOU
    WHO WERE YOU
    WHO WERE WE
    A lie, I tell you
    A lie
    A lie
    A long lie
    I believed that lie
    And as long as I shall live you will never be allowed in the presence of my heart again
    As long as my heart beats
    I shall speak of you no longer
    You’ve dissed me
    Hurt me like no other
    And it’s ****** up cause I cared for you
    Put you up there when you didn’t deserve to be there
    Loved you when you didn’t deserve to be in the presence of someone who
    …who, who….loved you like I
    stayed up all night writing poems about you and I
    Allowed you to caress my thoughts
    Seduce my mind
    Took in your words like Heroin
    And I hate myself for loving a man like you
    BE GONE!
    Be with the one you feel makes you complete
    And the next time we meet
    I’ll make sure to rip every copy of this poem up in your face
    For you are a disgrace to the REAL men who have walked upon these pages
    I have to end this
    My pen will not allow me to speak of a
    Remote individual such as you
    So do what u gotta do
    And when all your doors close
    You’ll knock on mine
    But I will not answer
    So you’ll call reminding me just in case I forgot…
    I love you
    Do anything for you
    Call me if you ever need me
    ….well you call
    and it rings; rings, rings and rings…
    “Hi. You’ve reached Jackie. Sorry I couldn’t answer the phone but if you leave a message after the beep, I’ll return your phone call as soon as possible.”
    Life is funny huh?
    I guess what goes around does come around
     
  2. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    True thing ...
    What goes UP, Must come DOWN.
    great right punch poet...^5
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    When you've realized you've been lied to, by the very person you thought would be honest, it hurts like all get out. You're right, he will get his. This was a bullseye scribe.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    wow u expressed it to the T
     
  5. mzpoetic8705

    mzpoetic8705 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    just want to thank you all on the love being given
    means a lot....glad u enjoyed it :)
     
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    Desert Storm Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Like that one kid in school who never wore deodorant
    That’s who you are to me-ms.poetic

    great piece and originality

    love this.

    thanks for this read.
    scribe on my sistah

    -d.s.
     
  7. mzpoetic8705

    mzpoetic8705 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    haha! lol...i don't think i want to be that one kid in school who never wore deodorant! lol.....that's not good
     
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