Black Poetry : exquisite

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  1. dnommo

    dnommo Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Exquisite…

    Delicate embrace within the
    petals of a rose so quiet and
    gentle in its smooth soft skin;

    Closed eyes to see you in dreams of
    love wishing upon daylight serenades
    of sparrows resting on high aspirations;

    Intrinsic thoughts of tomorrow Enraptured
    in mine leaving no room for doubt and yet
    my mind floods my heart with tales of woe;

    Sweet dreams will come and yet Our walk
    won’t be of one for a day will come when
    the petals of the rose will wither in demise…

    I moisten the hopes with tears of love
    caught on the branch of dreams never
    captured just resting for one to come
    pluck them from the grasp of incomplete;

    I love but I fear that all I wish and all I
    write will come true only to be all i fear
    and all I write as the truth of love will
    soon turn into the walls of despair…

    My heart breaks from fear of together
    and strives to find its rest among the
    serene garden built just for one…

    making room for another…
     
  2. Hunter

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    Nothing for your heart to fear dear poet
    Go where love goes
    And together you will
    Make a bed

    I am also one of your biggest fans...the feeling is mutual dear friend

    ;)

    *fearless*
     
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    maybe there's another garden for we
    if the garden of "me" hasn't room enough...
    fear sometimes blows fiercely like a stormy
    wind, causing delicate exquisite flowers
    to sway and lose some pedals...
    but in a greenhouse, there's no room for
    negativity... perhaps it's time for you to be repotted.
    -7:spinstar:
     
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    IMBEDED GARDEN OF ROSES

    U R READY NOW FOLLOW YA HEART
    FORTH IT SHELL TAKE U IN THE NEW
    IMBEDED GARDEN OF LOVE ........:D
     
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    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    MO, MO, MO, Mo,

    you have such a way with words
    man if was female i would have to step to you
    but i'm not
    so i'll give you dap instead


    Peace my brotha

    <DSS>
     
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    thank you all for your words and responses..

    just going through the stages of heartstings being pulled...

    we's cool tho'
     
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