Black Poetry : Expressing My Thoughts Towards You

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  1. PoeticThoughts

    PoeticThoughts Member MEMBER

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    Everytime I talk to you I
    can never express the way
    I feel, but I'm going to write
    this from deep in my heart
    and hopefully it will explain
    everything from the very start

    From the very first day I cared
    for you more than words can
    explain

    It was kind of weird, but
    true I really cared for you
    and adventually fell deep
    in love with you

    I tried and I tried, but
    every time you would
    just say good-bye

    I never understood why
    I kept running back to you,
    but now I know it's because
    deep down I could never
    be completely without you

    Now I'm sorry, I'm sorry
    for ever hurting you or
    making you cryI would
    always ask myself
    why, but it's because of
    all the pain I got bottled
    up inside

    You did your fair part you
    were another one who
    bruised my heart

    I just want to say I will
    never forget, but I do
    forgive you, and I'm sorry
    for all the pain I caused you
    and never being completely true
    to you, but no matter what
    you were always my boo,
    and I can honestly say I
    truly did always love you,
    and still do...
     
  2. JayL0v3

    JayL0v3 Banned

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    ONCE UPON A TIME
    WHEN THERE WAS US
    I GAVE U MY ALL
    EVERYTHING I OWNED
    WITH NO COLLATERAL
    IT WAS BASED ON TRUST
    UNFORTUNATELY THINGS CHANGE
    BECAUSE THATS THE WAY OF LIFE
    BUT LOVING U WAS INSTILLED IN ME
    I THOUGHT OF U DAY AND NIGHT
    I KNOW I WRITE IN PAST TENSE
    BUT BELIEVE ME
    EVERY WORD I SAY
    IS ONLY REFERENCE FOR THE FUTURE...
    AND PRESENT TENSE
    WHICH JUST MEANS I LOVED U THEN
    AND I STILL LOVE U TIL THIS DAY.

    NICE WORK MAMA ....1LUV
     
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