Black Poetry : Express to Me

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  1. PLATINUMILLITY1

    PLATINUMILLITY1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The coming into myself
    Am I me or am I you
    Will I be or
    Could I be
    I am a figment of my own imagination

    I need to be save
    Is a dream
    A nightmare doesn't last
    I live and
    I am Strong
    I just don't know
    Which side of the war I am fighting on
    I just know which side I want to win
    Hopefully That's my side.





    I wouldn't like to cry
    but, so I need peace
    Mind in peace
    The blissful paradise
    Am I the only one the seeks
    I and I am
    Fight am beginning the hunt
    Slaying for me
    Am I bringing peace?
    Or depths to myself
    and the worl
    Where will I be when the rain starts?
    Where willI reside?
    At the peak or?
    Tell me




    Should I count?
    Should I count down?
    NME is ready but...
    Is the world?
    I hope so
    I gotta take a look at something...

    Yes I drawn
    I guess I mean
    I'm drawn into a poetry's vision
    That....I am a Poetic sililoquy
    However Its spelled
    I don't mean to be Rhymin but...
    It's just what I'm about
    I'm so serious
    I'm so cerious





    Take a breath
    Smell
    The begining
    Smell the life to begin

    Take a Breath
    Live don't die
    Don't fall into the lost

    Take a breath
    Register your brain
    To see and Be Better


    Some of My thoughts while I wait and In pondering why.........
    Or How
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I take a breath
    As I allow my thoughts to slowly stream
    As I take a breath and pause it seems
    that my waking thoughts merge with my dreams

    But all that I am... my conscious state,
    my subconscious, and when I am asleep
    We all secretly hold hands
    Our connection is so deep

    And who is to say which of these states
    will have the most influence today
    I just hope and pray that positivity will make
    the strongest statement as I do it my way

    Again, you've made quite an impression with your expression, poetess. :)
     
  3. PLATINUMILLITY1

    PLATINUMILLITY1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you soo much
    but thank you can only go so far in a place like this
    sooo

    I'm with you
    I know
    I see it
    It glows
    The overwhelming thought
    Good, Bad
    Nothing any one else can unlock
    in you, feel
    Only you
    No one can heal you
    But.........
    Is it the call for healing?????
    or...........
     
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    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    push on poet

    and yes we need to stop and recognize the surroundings

    and understand the purities

    and the poisons

    lol
     
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    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Awesome piece poet,
    Yes we often have these thoughts...We ofen fight with the in's and out's of life... Who wins.
    I can relate to this.
     
  6. PLATINUMILLITY1

    PLATINUMILLITY1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    EXACTLY SO'JA IM HAPPY YOU WERE ABLE TO SEE SOME OF THIS
    AND QUEENTSWANA IM GLAD THAT YOU UNDERSTOOD AND COULD SEE IT AS WELL...
    THESE ARE REALLY THINGS THAT I WAS FIGHTING
    IN SOME CASES STILL AM....
    THANKX
     
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    the life's change of pros and cons something we all pounder on at times
    nice drop
     
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    Well Now

    This piece speaks volumes to me...

    Flow on Poetess, Keep On...
     
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    ~PEACE~

    THANK YOU.....IT'S ALL ABOUT LIFE
     
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