Black Poetry : Express My Self

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by rhymebad, Oct 25, 2008.

  1. rhymebad

    rhymebad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Express My Self

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    Express My Self

    Far as legal evil I’ve wreck nations to avoided so decoration
    Are awarded got ammo like Rambo M60 rejects on probation
    Go the duration in battle my flow pure information that rattle
    And straddle horses like cowboys got cattle with voices, I paddle
    Up creeks just to see Seattle’s corrupt streets like Walter Payton
    Falter invading basketball court need drastic support before creating
    And NBA championship, like rockets occupy space girls I want
    Some chocolate lace wear mixed bling with fixed wings but it don’t
    Fly, like aircrafts these girls stay aloft and lay on soft sheets
    “ Girl you must let me thrust a wet kiss at your lips sweets”
    When writing try spell proper and like a helicopter be unique
    Propel and flow well, got a rotten habit and my cotton fabrics
    Are ROCAWEAR and they on the block everywhere got to grab it
    Do maneuvers on a few computers like bazaar hackers and car jackers
    So far attackers seem to steer clear and fear I shoot screen like actors
    My rhyme topical are nice when I write about a tropical paradise
    Smell the vapor wanna excel in Jamacia dressed in yellow surprise
    STELLA after I get my wet groove back and prove facts be wise
    Look I’m a thug bent and I don’t love rent had to plug a vent just
    To keep the air out, the slum lord is dumb and avoid the issues dust
    In my bed now I must pledge not to pay for this relocation is a plus
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Da twisted tales of life living best thing sometime is to relocate
    never pay for anothers mistake in da place u reside so ya gotta ride
    out and get ya wet groove on da loose like hittin caboose as the bell
    roost

    tyte drop
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Gotta do what cha got to do, sometimes a permanent change of scenery is what the doctor ordered rhymebad.
     
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    sweet apple*pie Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Tyte flo! I just have a small suggestion...

    I found it a little hard to read this flo at first, because the layout is a bit blocky...maybe seperate the lines a bit to make it easier to read?


    with love,

    :kiss1:
     
  5. rhymebad

    rhymebad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks fo rthe props on this one yall
     
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